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Array ( [sid] => 43979 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Off [time] => 2004-04-20 00:06:35 [hometext] => ^^For all you ***** geniuses out there...^^ [bodytext] => These white walls, splattered
with blood, now
the waiting room to my life is full, so

go to hell
go to hell
go to hell

LEAVE ME THE ***** ALONE!!

I don't want you in my life.
I don't want anyone in my life

what makes you think i do??

You people ***** suck...
You make me ***** sick.
I'm going to kill you.
ALL of you.
I'm going to hit you in the kneecaps
with a Louisville Slugger
until you can't ***** breathe.

Would you like that?

I'm going open your stomach
with a steak knife,
then pull out your intestines
and strangle you with them...

Would you like that?

I didn't think so.

I think you are reading this thinking,
"This is kind of harsh..."
Well, what the ***** do you want?
I'm not gonna ***** kiss your ass.
I HATE YOU.

Or maybe you are thinking,
"This guy's ***** sweet."
Well, I STILL ***** hate you.
Please don't take it personal.
I wouldn't care if you did anyway.
I HATE YOU.

So ***** off.
Really.
I don't want anyone in my life.
You'll all just end up hurting me anyway.
You always do.

[ This black heart will never serve ]
never sever

i know you'd like it if i died...

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Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:06:35 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



These white walls, splattered
with blood, now
the waiting room to my life is full, so

go to hell
go to hell
go to hell

LEAVE ME THE ***** ALONE!!

I don't want you in my life.
I don't want anyone in my life

what makes you think i do??

You people ***** suck...
You make me ***** sick.
I'm going to kill you.
ALL of you.
I'm going to hit you in the kneecaps
with a Louisville Slugger
until you can't ***** breathe.

Would you like that?

I'm going open your stomach
with a steak knife,
then pull out your intestines
and strangle you with them...

Would you like that?

I didn't think so.

I think you are reading this thinking,
"This is kind of harsh..."
Well, what the ***** do you want?
I'm not gonna ***** kiss your ass.
I HATE YOU.

Or maybe you are thinking,
"This guy's ***** sweet."
Well, I STILL ***** hate you.
Please don't take it personal.
I wouldn't care if you did anyway.
I HATE YOU.

So ***** off.
Really.
I don't want anyone in my life.
You'll all just end up hurting me anyway.
You always do.

[ This black heart will never serve ]
never sever

i know you'd like it if i died...





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Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:54:17 AM AEST
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ooo, fiesty one now... gut-wrechning - literally! lol... oh wow, intruiging write! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:00:44 AM AEST
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Really full of anger, but good write!


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by SensitiveSoAbused on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:11:47 AM AEST
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the title is supposed to be ***** off but some wise ass mod thought it would look better as 'off' good *****in job. *flips bird*


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:01:04 AM AEST
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well, that was very descriptive, i hope it wasn't about me, i'm really sorry, it was a very good poem, a lot of emtion. G


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by MissLee on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:02:26 AM AEST
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ood job


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:46:45 AM AEST
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Black Heart? lol. I like that.
Nothing like a good rage now and again.


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:04:00 AM AEST
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hmm.. thats *cough*nice*cough* um..kinda angry mate. well i know how you feel. good write.. *hugs*


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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i really like this and have felt like that to so good job GREAT writting keep it up :)


Re: Off (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:11:27 PM AEST
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hmm this was interesting... dripping with anger which was evident I guess. I wouldn't like it if you died, but I think u know that. Keep up the writing man.

Bobo (Joel)




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