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eye to eye they see
how meening full and full of love
each other shall always be
Love they say is to strong for words
and to strong to throw around
but nothing feels more like love
then listening to their hearts' which pound
Love is the most incredible feeling
one usually describes with sighs
you can feel the warmth and respect
when you look in to your lovers eyes
If Love should ever come within two hearts
their souls will colide into one
Then life will turn into a wonderful place
and seem there is good to be done [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Gurlnxtdor05 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Lovers

Contributed by Gurlnxtdor05 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:09:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

As lovers sit beside each other
eye to eye they see
how meening full and full of love
each other shall always be
Love they say is to strong for words
and to strong to throw around
but nothing feels more like love
then listening to their hearts' which pound
Love is the most incredible feeling
one usually describes with sighs
you can feel the warmth and respect
when you look in to your lovers eyes
If Love should ever come within two hearts
their souls will colide into one
Then life will turn into a wonderful place
and seem there is good to be done

Copyright © Gurlnxtdor05 ... [ 2004-04-19 20:09:56]
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Re: Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramuel on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:17:57 PM AEST
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A good summary of love. The generalness is good; it allows a large audience to relate. The rhyming is pretty good, too. In the 5th and 6th lines you need to add another "o" to the word too, little things like spelling and punctuation help make a poem clean, so be on a lookout like that stuff. Good work.

-Ramuel

Re: Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:24:21 PM AEST
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I agree, but it's a wonderful piece people can connect with. I sure do, and I'm not the type that's into romance. :)

Re: Lovers (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:29:21 PM AEST
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Love is so many things. I like your description.

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