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Array ( [sid] => 43942 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Donkey [time] => 2004-04-19 19:27:10 [hometext] => IAN [bodytext] => You tell me I need help?
Well, look at you
You see into my imperfections
But you should think of you

You make me sick
To think I had you
What could I have been thinking
If I only knew...

That you would be a *******
That's right
That I would have to beat you off
Even tonight

I'm no longer wanting to be even friends
You betrayed me
How could you?

You were afraid to be a man
You were afraid to be there while I'm battling for my life
You looked through my diary
You screwed up my life

You think I'd be attracted to a long hair, bangy clothed nerd?
THINK AGAIN!
I don't even want you as a friend! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Randibee85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

The Donkey

Contributed by Randibee85 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You tell me I need help?
Well, look at you
You see into my imperfections
But you should think of you

You make me sick
To think I had you
What could I have been thinking
If I only knew...

That you would be a *******
That's right
That I would have to beat you off
Even tonight

I'm no longer wanting to be even friends
You betrayed me
How could you?

You were afraid to be a man
You were afraid to be there while I'm battling for my life
You looked through my diary
You screwed up my life

You think I'd be attracted to a long hair, bangy clothed nerd?
THINK AGAIN!
I don't even want you as a friend!

Copyright © Randibee85 ... [ 2004-04-19 19:27:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Donkey (User Rating: 1 )
by eviegirl on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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I like your writing style, I like how you can express yourself. You seem extremely angery, but you can share it in a way that everybody can understand.

Re: The Donkey (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:41:11 PM AEST
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Soooo sorry, I meant an *******. :> I don't know how to edit and the poem came out of nowhere. I was just writing... Messing around with the site.

Re: The Donkey (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:41:18 PM AEST
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A powerful outpouring of emotion. Better out than in!

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