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The pleasure of the game is real
Fulfilled in tactile tempest dreams
Placing me within your reach
I call your name sometimes in sleep
Before you turn my way again
With dreams we can both embrace
What lies in front of us unsure
Even if there is an "us" at all
But certain that I have found
Volatile expressions of passion
Minute by minute longing
Wanting what you offer me
Counting down the minutes
Until the ending eulogy
Bids us good-bye, ado, farewell
Alas tides turn in mystery
Our empty words drowned out
By wind and rain and history
Nothing to say - so we are silent
Steeped in lover’s quietude
Our world revolves around me and you

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Be With Me

Contributed by Merry on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:52:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The pleasure of the game is real
Fulfilled in tactile tempest dreams
Placing me within your reach
I call your name sometimes in sleep
Before you turn my way again
With dreams we can both embrace
What lies in front of us unsure
Even if there is an "us" at all
But certain that I have found
Volatile expressions of passion
Minute by minute longing
Wanting what you offer me
Counting down the minutes
Until the ending eulogy
Bids us good-bye, ado, farewell
Alas tides turn in mystery
Our empty words drowned out
By wind and rain and history
Nothing to say - so we are silent
Steeped in lover’s quietude
Our world revolves around me and you

Copyright © Merry ... [ 2004-04-19 18:52:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:00:48 PM AEST
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awwwww..aint that just the sweetest thing :o)
Gaille's in love Gailles in love( sings and grins) This was just adorable and the pic is perfect ;o)

Roses
Larry

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:02:59 PM AEST
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awww! sweet!! beautiful as always too:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:19:58 PM AEST
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You paint these pictures so vividly. So true to how it really feels at that moment. The emotion of it wells up in my throat.
Stitch

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:27:04 AM AEST
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The picture was a perfect match for this poem. It was soft, beautiful and wonderfully romantic. I thought an excellent title for this would have been "Lover's Quietude". It is a great poem and I hung on every word.

Kie

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:34:05 PM AEST
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Ha I love it. Great picture, too...

Mars

Re: Be With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:57:13 AM AEST
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The image and the words just seem to flow into each other a beautiful reflective write.

wildej.

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