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Array ( [sid] => 43928 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I could pt.2 [time] => 2004-04-19 18:21:45 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS PLEASE [bodytext] => If I could relive the past,
I would do that,
So many nights I cried,
For someone who didn't love me,
As much as I loved him,
If I could make you see,
That there was one girl,
Who truely cared for you,
You would open up that mind,
Of yours and know,
That we should have been together,
If I could take your hand,
And just hold it,
For a while,
As you put your arms around me,
I would then love you,
But now I can't cause,
There is something about you,
That makes alot of fear,
Come towards me in a row,
And the pain inside of this heart,
Hurts more everyday,
But you don't care cause you,
Act like you get mad,
Over things that ain't worth getting mad over,
Still I will continue this journey,
So still I say,
If I could love you again I would,
But you are nothing to me now,
I would change everything,
Only if I could [comments] => 3 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 32 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

If I could pt.2

Contributed by luckycharm on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

If I could relive the past,
I would do that,
So many nights I cried,
For someone who didn't love me,
As much as I loved him,
If I could make you see,
That there was one girl,
Who truely cared for you,
You would open up that mind,
Of yours and know,
That we should have been together,
If I could take your hand,
And just hold it,
For a while,
As you put your arms around me,
I would then love you,
But now I can't cause,
There is something about you,
That makes alot of fear,
Come towards me in a row,
And the pain inside of this heart,
Hurts more everyday,
But you don't care cause you,
Act like you get mad,
Over things that ain't worth getting mad over,
Still I will continue this journey,
So still I say,
If I could love you again I would,
But you are nothing to me now,
I would change everything,
Only if I could

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-19 18:21:45]
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Re: If I could pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:26:24 PM AEST
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yet again this was awesome. i can relate to this. this is somwhat sad but still a very amazing write.
well done keep it up.
Arden

Re: If I could pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:12:25 PM AEST
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i agree with arden
this is a very emotional write and you wrote it very well

Re: If I could pt.2 (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:00:16 PM AEST
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Another wonderful write

Lindsey

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