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Array ( [sid] => 43921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shine [time] => 2004-04-19 17:48:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you are my sun....
forever glowing...flowing
with the desire to inspire
knowledge of self
earning mental wealth
seeking everlasting life
wanting to shine
all day and night
reflecting your light
unto i, your moon,
only to assume
that i, too, will shine
during the time
when you can't, won't
or just don't
radiate.....
i must innovate
knowledge of wisdom
well informing them
that without knowledge within
it can never begin
to rotate, circulate, like
the number eight
in a three sixty for infiniti
and most importantly
recognizing the one
who's in need........
in me lies your seed
but before our star
touches this earth's landing
i'm demanding
that we come together
to enforce understanding
to be assure in time
our newborn will also shine [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 21 [informant] => ThicKnesS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Shine

Contributed by ThicKnesS on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:48:16 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

you are my sun....
forever glowing...flowing
with the desire to inspire
knowledge of self
earning mental wealth
seeking everlasting life
wanting to shine
all day and night
reflecting your light
unto i, your moon,
only to assume
that i, too, will shine
during the time
when you can't, won't
or just don't
radiate.....
i must innovate
knowledge of wisdom
well informing them
that without knowledge within
it can never begin
to rotate, circulate, like
the number eight
in a three sixty for infiniti
and most importantly
recognizing the one
who's in need........
in me lies your seed
but before our star
touches this earth's landing
i'm demanding
that we come together
to enforce understanding
to be assure in time
our newborn will also shine

Copyright © ThicKnesS ... [ 2004-04-19 17:48:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shine (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:01:31 PM AEST
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A bit hard to follow cause it wasnt broken up, but good write anyways! Good job!

Re: Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:55:09 AM AEST
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"that i, too, will shine
during the time
when you can't, won't
or just don't"

That's a good series of words. I found your poem interesting in its flow, if it was a little 'vertical'.
Keep writing.

Re: Shine (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:42:11 PM AEST
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this was a brilliant masterpeice. nice.

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