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frozen tears of sorrow,
icicles freeze upon your cheeks,
as water turns to ice at the touch of your skin.
cold, so cold,
i shiver at your touch...

wonderous beauty,
an ice statue,
carved in such delicate malice,
your features glisten with frozen hatred,
i want to keep you forever..
frozen beauty..
but you melt with the warmth of my love...
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frozen love

Contributed by lostinmyself on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:49:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

pretty eyes...
frozen tears of sorrow,
icicles freeze upon your cheeks,
as water turns to ice at the touch of your skin.
cold, so cold,
i shiver at your touch...

wonderous beauty,
an ice statue,
carved in such delicate malice,
your features glisten with frozen hatred,
i want to keep you forever..
frozen beauty..
but you melt with the warmth of my love...

Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-04-19 16:49:38]
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Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by eternallyloved on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:53:22 PM AEST
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very beautifully written. I quite enjoyed reading that. I am very impressed. Keep it up. I look foward to reading more.

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:26:00 PM AEST
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Wow... this is awesome!

"but you melt with the warmth of my love..."
sweet....

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by patar420 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:43:41 PM AEST
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wow, i really like it....i wish i could rite like that. keep on truckin, lol.

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by ThicKnesS on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:19:52 PM AEST
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first word that comes to mind....."sweet". it the kind of poem that make the broken hearted want to try love again.

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:33:46 PM AEST
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Vivid imagery...gentle flow.....ahhhhh the thrill of love and beauty!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:14:19 PM AEST
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You are on another roll girl. Really good stuff here. Really good. Insightful and intriguing.
Stitch

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:14:12 PM AEST
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Aww wow, this is breathtaking. Great write here I truly loved it.

Hugs 'n Love
- Becca

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:37:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow of words. :)
Liked it a lot.

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:13:57 AM AEST
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I thought the imagery was excellent in your poem. I really liked this one.

Kie

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:30:28 PM AEST
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wow, this poem is so sweet, and beautiful and...wow!

(I have bronchitis)

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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Can I just tell you how very awed I am by your talent? I love everything about this poem from the icy misty atmosphere to the simple but very effective imagery. Well done.

Re: frozen love (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:32:15 PM AEST
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exquisitly beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa

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