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Array ( [sid] => 43858 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eighteenth Cappuccino [time] => 2004-04-19 05:27:10 [hometext] => Take this as you may... I think it's actually a bit funny. [bodytext] => I sit in a café bar at midnight
Drowning down my eighteenth cappuccino
Spellbound, I watch the cars
Zoom by outside the window, the red lights trailing,
I’ve been wired for thirty-six hours
Haven’t slept since Tuesday
Tucked into the darkest corner
Pretty sure no one sees me

At 12:05 this night
A drunk stumbles in from a down-town club
Still waving a beer in hand
His friends order him some black coffee
Pop a cigarette between his dry, thin lips
He sings and he stutters
He dances and he trips
Lost and blinded in his haze of happy elixir
While I’m wired and on my eighteenth cappuccino

The drunk guffaws and spits and clops around the café
A chair tips over, then a table
There goes the third shattered coffeepot
The drunk collapses beside me,
Face inches from mine
Hey, I thought I couldn’t be seen!
A demonic smile and stale breath
Asks me, “How you doing, babe?�
“I’m wired and on my eighteenth cappuccino.�

He sneers and licks my cheek
His slimy and moldy and perverted tongue
Dragging across my cheek

He died at 12:15 this night
Got his skull bashed in and smashed to
A pulp

With the empty mug from my eighteenth cappuccino
I haven’t slept since Tuesday
And I’ve been wired for thirty-six hours
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Eighteenth Cappuccino

Contributed by angrybunny on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:27:10 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I sit in a café bar at midnight
Drowning down my eighteenth cappuccino
Spellbound, I watch the cars
Zoom by outside the window, the red lights trailing,
I’ve been wired for thirty-six hours
Haven’t slept since Tuesday
Tucked into the darkest corner
Pretty sure no one sees me

At 12:05 this night
A drunk stumbles in from a down-town club
Still waving a beer in hand
His friends order him some black coffee
Pop a cigarette between his dry, thin lips
He sings and he stutters
He dances and he trips
Lost and blinded in his haze of happy elixir
While I’m wired and on my eighteenth cappuccino

The drunk guffaws and spits and clops around the café
A chair tips over, then a table
There goes the third shattered coffeepot
The drunk collapses beside me,
Face inches from mine
Hey, I thought I couldn’t be seen!
A demonic smile and stale breath
Asks me, “How you doing, babe?�
“I’m wired and on my eighteenth cappuccino.�

He sneers and licks my cheek
His slimy and moldy and perverted tongue
Dragging across my cheek

He died at 12:15 this night
Got his skull bashed in and smashed to
A pulp

With the empty mug from my eighteenth cappuccino
I haven’t slept since Tuesday
And I’ve been wired for thirty-six hours




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Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:42:07 AM AEST
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There's a message here somewhere? never lick a womans face when she's coffeed up?!*
great write!.

wildej.


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:02:30 AM AEST
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LOL....Thanks for sharing this..I enjoyed it a great deal.....
Jenni


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:13:16 AM AEST
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Ha! never poke a coffee addict before their morning wake-up cup, and definitely not after 18 cups. Do you have to be a coffee fiend to understand and appreciate this poem? No. But if you want to feel the psychotic twitching pulsing through the veins like nervous electricity, Yes! A very, very dark, funny cautionary tale for both imbiber and unwelcome Lothario alike. Caffeine junkies on line applaud you!

Spike


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:44:35 AM AEST
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Very enjoyable write, may need to stop drinking coffee, well done


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:10:46 PM AEST
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haha... I think you should of put this under humorous poetry... it IS pretty funny...very good writing, I enjoyed.


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:43:44 PM AEST
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i remember nearly quitting coffee of all sorts awhile ago, but somehow the flavor always stays - and something random (like the disgusting drunk licking) always ends up happening. i love this, reminds me that there's never a dull moment! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Eighteenth Cappuccino (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:19:11 PM AEST
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That's hilarious!

I probably would kill him too. *grins*




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