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Array ( [sid] => 43797 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Addiction [time] => 2004-04-18 17:58:11 [hometext] => This just came into my head and I really love it...tell me what you think! [bodytext] => I crave his flesh upon my lips
To taste the sweet splendor of his blood,
That flows through me like a drug I can’t resist
Every night I lay in bed tossing and turning
Going through withdrawal that only he can take away

Come to me you dark harvester of the night
Reaping what is only yours to sew
I await you in this sleepless fight
With the pain that is only mine to know

I slit my wrists to taste the blood
Yet it does not over power the longing for you
One day I will drink all my blood
Then overdose on the wonderful drug
Just so I don’t have to wait forever
For a man that will not come back to me
For he is already addicted to someone else
Yet she has no clue what drug she has
She has no clue how much he is worth


[comments] => 5 [counter] => 656 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Kirby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Sweet Addiction

Contributed by Kirby on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:58:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I crave his flesh upon my lips
To taste the sweet splendor of his blood,
That flows through me like a drug I can’t resist
Every night I lay in bed tossing and turning
Going through withdrawal that only he can take away

Come to me you dark harvester of the night
Reaping what is only yours to sew
I await you in this sleepless fight
With the pain that is only mine to know

I slit my wrists to taste the blood
Yet it does not over power the longing for you
One day I will drink all my blood
Then overdose on the wonderful drug
Just so I don’t have to wait forever
For a man that will not come back to me
For he is already addicted to someone else
Yet she has no clue what drug she has
She has no clue how much he is worth






Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2004-04-18 17:58:11]
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Re: Sweet Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:03:41 PM AEST
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"Come to me you dark harvester of the night
Reaping what is only yours to sew
I await you in this sleepless fight
With the pain that is only mine to know"

that stanza is awesome.. good stuff.


Re: Sweet Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Vickie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:09:25 PM AEST
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awesome!! i know the way you are feeling... cant wait to read more


Re: Sweet Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by muno3 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:08:08 PM AEST
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dark...I can almost see you waiting for him


Re: Sweet Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:34:41 PM AEST
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Dark and very interesting. It leads the reader on a spellbinding journey.

Kie


Re: Sweet Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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"Come to me you dark harvester of the night
Reaping what is only yours to sew
I await you in this sleepless fight
With the pain that is only mine to know"

I totally agree with Daniela
*smiles*
This piece kept me on the edge..the imagery is fantastic.Wonderful work!!!

LW




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