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Array ( [sid] => 43791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mistake [time] => 2004-04-18 16:52:01 [hometext] => nothing u say can hurt me... [bodytext] => i once heard sumone call me a mistake
wut was i supposed to say
all this time my life is a fake

"mom and dad never meant for it to happen"
the pain inside was hard to hide
it hurt my heart-even at age eleven

as much as i have been thru as a child
with that word being stained on my brain
how can people expect me not to be wild

but as the time is passing by
there are many people who made that word a lie
wen it does linger in my head again, i begin to cry

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mistake

Contributed by Vickie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

i once heard sumone call me a mistake
wut was i supposed to say
all this time my life is a fake

"mom and dad never meant for it to happen"
the pain inside was hard to hide
it hurt my heart-even at age eleven

as much as i have been thru as a child
with that word being stained on my brain
how can people expect me not to be wild

but as the time is passing by
there are many people who made that word a lie
wen it does linger in my head again, i begin to cry

Copyright © Vickie ... [ 2004-04-18 16:52:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Stormydwn on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:57:02 PM AEST
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No mistakes in this world. Ever.

Re: mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by eternallyloved on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:57:17 PM AEST
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Im sorry u hurt like that. One of my friends went through much of the same thing. Even though u may not have been expected, that doesnt mean your parents dont thank God for thier surprise gift every day of thier lifes. There is a plan for your life, and even if your parents didnt plan you, God did. Beautifully written and emotion provoking.

Re: mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:20:18 PM AEST
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This Is So Sad For Someone To Call Anyone A Mistake....I'm Sorry But That's How I Feel About It...No One Can Ever Be A Mistake....
Hugs And God Bless !!!!!!!!!!
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
****************************

Re: mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:21:33 PM AEST
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honestly... IF it there was a mistake you wouldn't be here. but you're here, and you can pen this out - no way you could get this far and be "a mistake" good write, keep it up! ;0)
~Remy~

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