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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Few Short Hours
[time] => 2004-04-18 15:49:35
[hometext] => i'll be gone soon
[bodytext] => You won't see me at school tomorrow
In fact you'll never see me ever again
I'll be gone before tonight
And no one will have a clue.
I see those fake smiles you give me
Acting like you care
I know you don't
There's no need to pretend
But it doesn't matter anymore
Cause soon enough I'll be gone.
You'll live on your life
Nothing will change
I meant nothing to you
You meant the world to me
So this is it
It is the end
A few short hours
And I'll be gone.
[comments] => 7
[counter] => 309
[topic] => 36
[informant] => justjames
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 19
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
A Few Short Hours
Contributed by
justjames
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:49:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You won't see me at school tomorrow
In fact you'll never see me ever again
I'll be gone before tonight
And no one will have a clue.
I see those fake smiles you give me
Acting like you care
I know you don't
There's no need to pretend
But it doesn't matter anymore
Cause soon enough I'll be gone.
You'll live on your life
Nothing will change
I meant nothing to you
You meant the world to me
So this is it
It is the end
A few short hours
And I'll be gone.
Copyright ©
justjames
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2004-04-18 15:49:35]
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by brookiecookie02 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:53:46 PM AEST
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im so sry u feel this way
i hope u have over come it
this poem was very well writen and i look foward to seeing more of ur work!
hugs and luv
-brooke |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by eternallyloved on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:59:57 PM AEST
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| I understand what u are feeling, honestly i do. Do yourself a favor, give yourself time to think about it and talk to someone, anyone, even me. Send me an email or im and we can talk. think of the pain u are feeling and then consider the pain you will be causing to soooo many other people if you go through with this. While it may seem like no one truely cares, so many people do. Please just talk to someone before u go through with this if this is honestly how u feel. My email is listed if u need to talk or pm me. God Bless. |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by Vickie on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:12:51 PM AEST
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| *wipes tear* ....staying strong...thats wut i had to do wen i felt the same way u do...it reminds me of the hard times i've had and all the people who made my life worth living. *wipes tear* be strong for those who love you, as well as yourself...if u need sumone to talk to who's been where u are jus contact me, we can talk |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:28:34 PM AEST
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Really touching write... well done... Hope you feel better soon...I'd love to read more from you..
Jenni |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:41:30 PM AEST
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| There ARE people who care for you... I hope you didn't go through with it. Be strong, your life is worth much more than what you're thinking right now. |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:20:42 PM AEST
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| Please... don't do it. I did the same exact thing. Please don't.... Please pm me.... I really want to talk to you. There ARE people who care, I'm sure of it. I know you won't believe me, but.... please.... just please..... I know how painful it is. Feeling like there's nothing else to do or live for, but just get through this one night. Just this one night... I can remember all too well the eve of my suicide... *shudders and cries* just please... talk to me and don't do it!!! I won't try to be your shrink or anything, (I know how much that would ***** ME off) I'll just listen if you want. I'll try to give as much support as I can. But you have to talk to me first... |
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Re: A Few Short Hours
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:10:02 AM AEST
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| great write, totally explicit and confronting. I realte to this easily, and I hope to read more from you; |
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