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[title] => You Saved from Suicide
[time] => 2004-04-18 15:39:33
[hometext] => please comment. Think poem is about a hard time in my life after a break up wen i didn't feel like living anymore but theres one person that kept me alive im now in a relationship with them n i love them very much please comment
[bodytext] => Dark room filled with hate. As i stand in the middle of the room with the gun loaded my life flashes by. My friends who betrayed me (gun highers) The father who hates me (guns half way up) The loved that failed me (guns to my head) Then i think about the one who saved me. I fall to the ground blood shot eyes bleeding from the perfect suicide i think of your face and open my eyes look to the door and i see a new light
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You Saved from Suicide
Contributed by
lexxie
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:39:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dark room filled with hate. As i stand in the middle of the room with the gun loaded my life flashes by. My friends who betrayed me (gun highers) The father who hates me (guns half way up) The loved that failed me (guns to my head) Then i think about the one who saved me. I fall to the ground blood shot eyes bleeding from the perfect suicide i think of your face and open my eyes look to the door and i see a new light
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Re: You Saved from Suicide
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by brookiecookie02 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:42:01 PM AEST
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a VERY touching poem. im so sry u felt that way. i really hope ur doin ok now. a very beautiful poem. i look foward to seeing more of ur stuff.
-brooke |
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Re: You Saved from Suicide
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:53:09 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery, wish it didn't have to go through that way, but still... great poetry... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: You Saved from Suicide
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:02:17 PM AEST
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Now this is a great poem!!! Told u that u had great potential!!LOL
~Donna~ |
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Re: You Saved from Suicide
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:42:19 AM AEST
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May that person love you always May your beacon light never cease to burn bright.
Take care.
David |
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