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Perhaps in the hollow valley
Emptiness to grab upon
Slowly mounting my slaughter
I shadow the permanence
Heaving my weight of sorrow
Destiny outspread
You will not slip away
Resting you breathe shallow
My longing for proper demise
Your defeat will only please my dark mind

Where will it end
Perhaps in your hollow valley
Desirable you have become
You have now awoken
Unpleasant you reflect
Silent as a phantom
You scream
Never to be heard
Dry tears will not fall
Stroking life with death
Happiness in your hollow valley

Where will it end
Perhaps in your hollow valley
Don’t walk away
Lay and permit my illusion
To approach you
With silence
Don’t walk away
I am lost
Guide me to your hollow valley
Where I may die
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Where will it end?

Contributed by williamdye on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Where will it end
Perhaps in the hollow valley
Emptiness to grab upon
Slowly mounting my slaughter
I shadow the permanence
Heaving my weight of sorrow
Destiny outspread
You will not slip away
Resting you breathe shallow
My longing for proper demise
Your defeat will only please my dark mind

Where will it end
Perhaps in your hollow valley
Desirable you have become
You have now awoken
Unpleasant you reflect
Silent as a phantom
You scream
Never to be heard
Dry tears will not fall
Stroking life with death
Happiness in your hollow valley

Where will it end
Perhaps in your hollow valley
Don’t walk away
Lay and permit my illusion
To approach you
With silence
Don’t walk away
I am lost
Guide me to your hollow valley
Where I may die

Copyright © williamdye ... [ 2004-04-18 15:27:03]
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Re: Where will it end? (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:32:09 PM AEST
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excellent write...
i liked how you took the first two lines n' started with it with each stanza..

luck to you
~neglected1~

Re: Where will it end? (User Rating: 1 )
by dead_beauty on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:35:38 PM AEST
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absolute dark elegance...i loved it! makes me want to read lots more from you! :)~ravenghost

Re: Where will it end? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:29:47 PM AEST
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This is your best one yet. Your analogies are fantastic. Please continue to submit. Hugh G. Rection

Re: Where will it end? (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:50:17 PM AEST
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hum... darkness... and poetry entertwined like jelly... with that other brown stuff... uh... peanut butter! yea! lol, don't ask... good write! ;0)
~Remy~

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