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When I'm feeling all alone
And decidin' the undecided
You make me feel excited
Your voice has a sweet vibration
Fills my mind with elation

But can you hear me now?
I've been empty for awhile
And you're someone,
that can make me smile
When I see your hair that shimmers in the light
My heart starts to fly like a kite

I dream the impossible dream
Love's more than it seems
But can I be a friend?
Could both of our lives blend?
Or am I cursed to be unstable?
And to live in my little fable?

But can you see me now?
I've been lonely for awhile
And you're someone,
that can take away my self-denial
When I see your eyes that shimmer in my mind
I get filled with something time after time [comments] => 6 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ThePumpkinKing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Shimmers

Contributed by ThePumpkinKing on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Think about you when I'm at home
When I'm feeling all alone
And decidin' the undecided
You make me feel excited
Your voice has a sweet vibration
Fills my mind with elation

But can you hear me now?
I've been empty for awhile
And you're someone,
that can make me smile
When I see your hair that shimmers in the light
My heart starts to fly like a kite

I dream the impossible dream
Love's more than it seems
But can I be a friend?
Could both of our lives blend?
Or am I cursed to be unstable?
And to live in my little fable?

But can you see me now?
I've been lonely for awhile
And you're someone,
that can take away my self-denial
When I see your eyes that shimmer in my mind
I get filled with something time after time

Copyright © ThePumpkinKing ... [ 2004-04-18 12:30:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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A beautifil write very well done.

wildej.

Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:31:01 PM AEST
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sounds like a thoughtful blues song, i like it... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST
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Wow awesome poem! Hmm can feel longing in it, am I wrong? Awesome write!
Anne :D

Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:37:47 PM AEST
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This Is A Beautiful Poem :-) Written Very Well
It Was An Enjoyable Read ....Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL******
***************************

Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:40:04 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully written, very loving, one of your sweetest best! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Shimmers (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:56:42 PM AEST
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*Sighs wistfully*

I remember those days, those feelings. I miss them yet i'm not sure that I want them again.

Excellent poem ((5)) all the way.

Kie

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