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Array ( [sid] => 43663 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Surrendered [time] => 2004-04-17 18:35:18 [hometext] => This is my first poem here I hope you guys enjoy it! :-) [bodytext] => I surrender to you
No matter what I have to do
I won't jump to be in command
I will lay things in your hands

Whatever I have to do
I will only serve you

The spirit from above
Has filled me up with love
I will love one another
As if they were my brother

I can't be perfect but I'll try
And I will try not to ask why

Even if it doesn't make sense
I know you will find a way
For it to turn out alright
If I do as you say

Lord I'll do what you want me to do
Because I'm surrendered to you [comments] => 6 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 11 [informant] => brookiecookie02 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
Surrendered

Contributed by brookiecookie02 on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:35:18 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



I surrender to you
No matter what I have to do
I won't jump to be in command
I will lay things in your hands

Whatever I have to do
I will only serve you

The spirit from above
Has filled me up with love
I will love one another
As if they were my brother

I can't be perfect but I'll try
And I will try not to ask why

Even if it doesn't make sense
I know you will find a way
For it to turn out alright
If I do as you say

Lord I'll do what you want me to do
Because I'm surrendered to you




Copyright © brookiecookie02 ... [ 2004-04-17 18:35:18]
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Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:52:59 PM AEST
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First welcom to our global familly here.
Very beautifull write. Once we surrender then heaven is ours.
Very good work and I'm looking forward to more.
luv, huggs, faith, joy,
emy


Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 1 )
by faithmairee on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:53:57 PM AEST
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I'm glad I get to be the first one to comment on your first poem. First, I want to extend a very warm welcome to you. This is a great site and I feel sure you are going to emjoy your stay.

Your poem was truly awesome. Complete surrender is my goal but in order to do it i must set aside my ego which said another was as asing God Out! My thoughts on your poem are that is an excellent piece of work. I will be looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work'...This one definitely deserves a 5 star rating!

Faith


Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:30:51 PM AEST
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Nicely done, and welcome :-).

--Nora


Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:42:07 PM AEST
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You know what I think....

-Kristen


Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:21:35 PM AEST
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Very good! A prayer we should all pray! keep posting!


Re: Surrendered (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:20:25 PM AEST
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I know its been a while since you put this here but I couldn't go without commenting on it. GREAT WRITE that is soo awesome I know exactly how you feel. Its nice to know there are other Christians that feel the same way I do. If you would like feel free to PM me anytime!!

Stephanie




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