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Array ( [sid] => 43654 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crying the night away [time] => 2004-04-17 17:32:49 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS POETRY PLEASE [bodytext] => The tears that run slowly down my face,
Turn into deep blue seas,
I have to get away form this place,
So I won't be caught up in misery,
The lies which come towards me,
Won't help me rise again,
It's like things won't let me be,
Or is it just a sin,
I'm sick and tired of hearing the blues,
Being so confused,
Feeling like I'm used,
Boy what's the use,
I see broken glass,
Just shattered into pieces,
I see your days pass,
As if though you are leaving,
I need someone to wash away the pain,
Protect me from the rain,
As it keeps falling down,
And there's no one around,
The comotion we go through,
The emotion of loving you,
Just stays in my mind,
It's like I can't find,
That special boy in my world,
To share this life with me,
Am I the only girl,
Who can't find destiny,
I wan't to regain,
The strength in me,
I wan't to replace,
The love within me,
So when I finally get you,
It will just be me and you,
And this time I'm not losing your love,
Many people may think that I,
Won't be alright,
Trust me if I have been living this life alone,
Nothing can hold me back,
But that boy's love,
And it's like I keep saying this over and over again,
But this time I have to win,
His heart so I can feel free,
I just don't need to be,
Crying the night away

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Crying the night away

Contributed by luckycharm on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:32:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The tears that run slowly down my face,
Turn into deep blue seas,
I have to get away form this place,
So I won't be caught up in misery,
The lies which come towards me,
Won't help me rise again,
It's like things won't let me be,
Or is it just a sin,
I'm sick and tired of hearing the blues,
Being so confused,
Feeling like I'm used,
Boy what's the use,
I see broken glass,
Just shattered into pieces,
I see your days pass,
As if though you are leaving,
I need someone to wash away the pain,
Protect me from the rain,
As it keeps falling down,
And there's no one around,
The comotion we go through,
The emotion of loving you,
Just stays in my mind,
It's like I can't find,
That special boy in my world,
To share this life with me,
Am I the only girl,
Who can't find destiny,
I wan't to regain,
The strength in me,
I wan't to replace,
The love within me,
So when I finally get you,
It will just be me and you,
And this time I'm not losing your love,
Many people may think that I,
Won't be alright,
Trust me if I have been living this life alone,
Nothing can hold me back,
But that boy's love,
And it's like I keep saying this over and over again,
But this time I have to win,
His heart so I can feel free,
I just don't need to be,
Crying the night away

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-17 17:32:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:35:40 PM AEST
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A very good write, with alot of emotion. I totally relate to this.
Well done

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:38:13 PM AEST
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Buck up little camper, things will get better, I promise. Great write

Lindsey

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:15:22 PM AEST
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well written and alot of emotion,
hope things sort themselves out

:D
Kakashi

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by brookiecookie02 on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:39:22 PM AEST
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i really like this poem!!
u did a great job
i cant wait to see more of ur work

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:15:34 PM AEST
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i enjoyed this poem a lot i can really relate to it:) xcellent write!!
~*xObeaOx*~

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:30:52 PM AEST
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Notch up another good one!

wildej.

Re: Crying the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:05:48 PM AEST
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W0W!!! such an emotial poem, i felt like crying! i know how you feel, all alone, like you'll never find that special someone in your life......i've been there.........try not to worry, some times it takes poeple longer to find love, but hey! wouldnt it be better just to find an actual true love than going along with the crowd and getting into relation ships that dont last and have no meaning, its wayyy better to find an actual love than to just have some meaningless flings!!
dont worry, youll get your chance soon enough to experiance it all.

TwEeKy

another dies and the world just shruggs it off.............

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