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My heart flutters at the sight of a new day
And then I realize that nothing is as it seems.
One thing that I hate is you right now.

Friends since we were in 3rd grade
You were the best ever…so I thought.
Now you are a drug user and a slut.
You don’t ever call.
You don’t even talk to me in the mornings.
You hug me like we are ok.
But even our friend has said for you to call me.

When the sun set on my life on the 26th.
You were there for me.
Then you left me like it was nothing.

Do you realize how you hurt me?
I leave July 16th forever.
You are just making it so easy for me to leave.
So I will say that to you…
The day has set on us.
Tomorrow I will wake up…
And you will not be in my heart anymore.
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Friends No More

Contributed by Kirby on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:09:14 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

In the blessed morning of the sunlight
My heart flutters at the sight of a new day
And then I realize that nothing is as it seems.
One thing that I hate is you right now.

Friends since we were in 3rd grade
You were the best ever…so I thought.
Now you are a drug user and a slut.
You don’t ever call.
You don’t even talk to me in the mornings.
You hug me like we are ok.
But even our friend has said for you to call me.

When the sun set on my life on the 26th.
You were there for me.
Then you left me like it was nothing.

Do you realize how you hurt me?
I leave July 16th forever.
You are just making it so easy for me to leave.
So I will say that to you…
The day has set on us.
Tomorrow I will wake up…
And you will not be in my heart anymore.

Copyright © Kirby ... [ 2004-04-17 12:09:14]
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Re: Friends No More (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:14:56 PM AEST
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thnx for commenting on my poetry, I want to say that your stuff is great also, i'm commenting on this one, cause I had a best friend too who turned into a slut, and for some reason it embarassed me, she just didn't want to be my friend anymore and she changed so much
well anyway keep writting, you're very good at it

Re: Friends No More (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:42:52 AM AEST
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oh wow......this is good......told straight from the heart........painful to hear.....painful to say........"and you will not be in my heart anymore"......wow

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