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Today I saw a face from the past
Like a ghost that was surpassed
A haunting look upon my face
Memories forgotten fell into place

Haunting smile took my breathe away
Forgotten feelings back for one day
That smile those eyes same shine
Lips that once tasted so divine

Lost forever just a moment in time
Flooding back feelings so sublime
Names etched on an old oak tree
Midnight strolls beside the sea

Songs forgotten echo's in my mind
Music and love once left behind
Leaving a trail of thoughts suppressed
A haunting smile a love possessed

Just a stranger who stopped to say hello
His eerie shadow left a haunting glow
Fading memories lost for a while
A strangers smile a day worthwhile

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HAUNTING SMILE

Contributed by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:13:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Haunting Smile

Today I saw a face from the past
Like a ghost that was surpassed
A haunting look upon my face
Memories forgotten fell into place

Haunting smile took my breathe away
Forgotten feelings back for one day
That smile those eyes same shine
Lips that once tasted so divine

Lost forever just a moment in time
Flooding back feelings so sublime
Names etched on an old oak tree
Midnight strolls beside the sea

Songs forgotten echo's in my mind
Music and love once left behind
Leaving a trail of thoughts suppressed
A haunting smile a love possessed

Just a stranger who stopped to say hello
His eerie shadow left a haunting glow
Fading memories lost for a while
A strangers smile a day worthwhile

Copyright © sweetangeluk ... [ 2004-04-17 10:13:46]
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Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:43:47 AM AEST
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Very touching.

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramuel on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:45:08 AM AEST
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Good love poem. The rhyming and meter are smooth and effective. I like structured poems, good job.

-Ramuel

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:38:38 AM AEST
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I liked this a lot.I have always thought the most captivating thing in the world is a smile
Take care

steve

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:31:59 PM AEST
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Your poem stirred emotions inside of me that seemed dormant but are not. I felt that old twinge of pain inside and really pictured what it must be like. The last stanza ended the poem perfectly.

Kie

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 08:32:03 PM AEST
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Sweetangeluk, this is an incredible write! Absolutely flawless! I love it! I, too, have been through this. A smile, the eyes, thehair; things that evoke memories of a love that you once had... Such an enthralling flow, captivating till the end! I truly enjoyed this, sweetangel! You are very talented, mon precieux ange! You weave words with a perfect hand, and create the most beautiful art! Vivid pictures form in this fevered mind, making these eyes weep... A heartfelt write, and a radiant hymn of a love remembered. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! All my love!

~*Fleur de Sang*~

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 05:57:14 AM AEST
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I have commented on this one before Angel but every time I start reading thru your poetry it catches my eye every single time.

I feel a kinship to this poem. Ever feel that way. Just drawn to a nice work?

Wonderful job that really says so much.

Kie

Re: HAUNTING SMILE (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:57:38 PM AEST
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precious memories....hugs n' love nessa

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