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Array ( [sid] => 43565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Revenge [time] => 2004-04-16 20:21:01 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote a little while ago for no apparent reason... [bodytext] => You’ve done this terrible thing to me, and you did it in front of them all.
You showed who I really was and she, she was there and saw.
Now, the world hates me, there isn’t one who would hear my plea.
And its because of you, you terrible fiend, that my power will never come to be.
My image is ruined, my relations are tarnished, and that girl,
She saw and she, she was the key to it all.

Run you bastard!
Run through the street!
Run on and let them all see!
You, being chased by me.
But you’re afoot,
And I,
On steed -
And now I’ve cornered you,
And now it is I who will not hear your plea.

You took off my mask and let them all see!

But you are a beast – they’d all been deceived!

You’re not one to meddle with my rise to power!
I was so close and still could be,
but you told them all, as well as she!

Men like you should not have such power!
You’d throw the world into its darkest hour!

Shut up you dog! You beggar!
Now I am nothing! I’m ruined! I must start anew elsewhere!
I worked for years – spent a quarter of my life building this affair!
You’re the reason for it! You’ve ruined it all!
Now you're cornered, now you will fall!
With this sword I will end your false heroics once and for all!

Killing me does nothing for you, now!

Shut your mouth!
I will have my-- [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Ramuel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
Revenge

Contributed by Ramuel on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 08:21:01 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



You’ve done this terrible thing to me, and you did it in front of them all.
You showed who I really was and she, she was there and saw.
Now, the world hates me, there isn’t one who would hear my plea.
And its because of you, you terrible fiend, that my power will never come to be.
My image is ruined, my relations are tarnished, and that girl,
She saw and she, she was the key to it all.

Run you bastard!
Run through the street!
Run on and let them all see!
You, being chased by me.
But you’re afoot,
And I,
On steed -
And now I’ve cornered you,
And now it is I who will not hear your plea.

You took off my mask and let them all see!

But you are a beast – they’d all been deceived!

You’re not one to meddle with my rise to power!
I was so close and still could be,
but you told them all, as well as she!

Men like you should not have such power!
You’d throw the world into its darkest hour!

Shut up you dog! You beggar!
Now I am nothing! I’m ruined! I must start anew elsewhere!
I worked for years – spent a quarter of my life building this affair!
You’re the reason for it! You’ve ruined it all!
Now you're cornered, now you will fall!
With this sword I will end your false heroics once and for all!

Killing me does nothing for you, now!

Shut your mouth!
I will have my--




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Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:52:16 PM AEST
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it's strange, but when I read the poem, i actually felt like it was real
very moving


Re: Revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Seikjo on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:22:13 PM AEST
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I liked it, it was good




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