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[title] => LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
[time] => 2002-09-27 16:00:00
[hometext] => Hatred can rob one of victory!
[bodytext] => Use 2 dog out enimies in my mind.
That wasn't at all kind.
It's human nature to hurt back
but there's certainly a remady for that!
Inner hatred adds fuel to flame
when on others our problems we blame.
Oh but Jesus gives the key.
There's liberty in 4-giveness, U see?
Now when trouble round does roll
look past pain to another's soul.
Many mistakes we all make
so remember this for your enemies sake.
When hatred tries 2 eat U alive
Put confidense in Jesus,
let it slide.
Look 2 Jesu at his cross.
Then Satan's fake power
is tottaly lost!
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LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
Contributed by
emystar
on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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Use 2 dog out enimies in my mind.
That wasn't at all kind.
It's human nature to hurt back
but there's certainly a remady for that!
Inner hatred adds fuel to flame
when on others our problems we blame.
Oh but Jesus gives the key.
There's liberty in 4-giveness, U see?
Now when trouble round does roll
look past pain to another's soul.
Many mistakes we all make
so remember this for your enemies sake.
When hatred tries 2 eat U alive
Put confidense in Jesus,
let it slide.
Look 2 Jesu at his cross.
Then Satan's fake power
is tottaly lost!
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emystar
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2002-09-27 16:00:00]
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by aernby on
Friday, 27th September 2002 @ 11:27:06 PM AEST
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this is a tough one --
?--Is your eccentric spelling purposeful?
?--what happens to hatred when we "let it slide"? does it go away, or, does it become self-loathing?
you've got the basics of the idea "LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS..." but, imho, you have not plumbed the depths...
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 08:51:38 AM AEST
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.About my ecentic spelling, It serves my purpose.....
To forgive one must deal with their own inner self.....A person can hate easily but it's hard to get to the core of hatred. One must explore their own reasons to forgive....It's pointless to hate 'cause hate kills ones own victory.
We all must deal with life within....Once the inner self is free then it shows on the outside.
Thanks for your comment and for taking time to read this write.....Have a good one and God bless you and yours,
emy |
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by Rose on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 10:02:17 AM AEST
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Good write Emy. Gotcha on the meaning well indeed. God the father, his Son Jesus, made it for us to be as we are. Keeping all that pent up inside of us, the hate and anger, is a fisted fury of h*ll to burn. So well written. Although, not sure of your spelling intent, I know you do well on this as well, so Was this done also for a meaning to the write? I know you can write even deeper on this, but I know you seem to have written it so, to get the attention of those who don't know. ...
hope you are well, and enjoy all the writes...... Amber Rose :) |
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by S_K_Williamson on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 04:54:13 PM AEST
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Emy,
Glad to see you! Keep up the great work.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;) |
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 05:56:20 PM AEST
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Thanks, my friend!
Yes I' m fine and thanks for being you, with concern.....
As for spelling goes, The spelling of Jesus was an ovesite of mine. The rest????? You read that one well......In school spelling be's I was always next to last to sit down.....Not bragging, just fact.
Being a resonably well traveled country gal, I've met many charectors in my day.....Being a people person, I never meet a stranger.....God gifted me with a form of exspression that amazes me as I'm sure all writers have when they stop writing long enough to read what God meant just as much for the writer as lothers, whoever choses to read it.
we the vessles that are willing to write what we channel whether it be life, amgels, demons,( we all have them) o r whatever.....Yes it's definently a form of exspressing what ener comes.....So who ever, this is their form of exsprision.!
I know I don't need to explain this to U.
Sorry I haVEN'T BEEN IN CONTACT ENoUGH BUT i AT IT AGAain and it's so nice to here from u.
PEACE, LUV, FRIENDS, YOUR-POETRY,
DO IT YOUR WAY!!!
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 06:02:51 PM AEST
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Thanks, my friend!
Yes I' m fine and thanks for being you, with concern.....
As for spelling goes, The spelling of Jesus was an ovesite of mine. The rest????? You read that one well......In school spelling be's I was always next to last to sit down.....Not bragging, just fact.
Being a resonably well traveled country gal, I've met many charectors in my day.....Being a people person, I never meet a stranger.....God gifted me with a form of exspression that amazes me as I'm sure all writers have when they stop writing long enough to read what God meant just as much for the writer as others, whoever chooses to read it.
we the vessles are willing to write what we channel whether it be life, angels, demons,( we all have them) o r whatever.?????....Yes it's definently a form of exspressing what ever comes.....So who ever, this is their form of exspression.!
I know I don't need to explain this to U.
Sorry I haVEN'T BEEN IN CONTACT ENoUGH BUT i AT IT AGAain and it's so nice to hear from u.
PEACE, LUV, FRIENDS, YOUR-POETRY,
DO IT YOUR WAY!!!
emy |
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 28th September 2002 @ 06:09:54 PM AEST
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WY thank ya thar, friend, Ur an angel!!!!!!
goOd 2 see u!!!!!!!
PEACE, LUV, FRIENDS LIKE U, opps 4-GOT, WE'RE A GLOBAL FAMILY....GGGRRRRREEEEEEEEAAAATT 2 heAr from u too!
EMY |
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Re: LIBERTY IN 4-GIVENESS U SEE?
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:25:19 PM AEST
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This is so true and beautiful.
Spazzo |
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