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Array ( [sid] => 43483 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ?Fifth Virus? [time] => 2004-04-16 07:55:04 [hometext] => This is not a poem. Just a note I wanted to write. [bodytext] => Fifth virus?
I have never heard of it before,
my little boy has this.

It upsets me
to see him so sick,
he has a rash
on his cute little face,
a fever,
and an upset stomach.

I don't know what
I'm supposed to do,
he's been like this since yesterday,
he's been awake since
4 o'clock this morning.

My heart and soul
feel for him,
I sit here and watch
his every little move.

I thank God
this virus isn't bringing him down,
I just hope
it doesn't stay around
for too long,
it breaks my heart
to see him so sick.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.16/2004

. .
o
~

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?Fifth Virus?

Contributed by Cynthia on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:55:04 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

Fifth virus?
I have never heard of it before,
my little boy has this.

It upsets me
to see him so sick,
he has a rash
on his cute little face,
a fever,
and an upset stomach.

I don't know what
I'm supposed to do,
he's been like this since yesterday,
he's been awake since
4 o'clock this morning.

My heart and soul
feel for him,
I sit here and watch
his every little move.

I thank God
this virus isn't bringing him down,
I just hope
it doesn't stay around
for too long,
it breaks my heart
to see him so sick.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.16/2004

. .
o
~

Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-04-16 07:55:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ?Fifth Virus? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:24:55 AM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear your child is sick. I pray he gets to feeling better very soon. I have never heard of the "fifth virus" but it sounds terrible. I have heard of "Fifth's disease" which is horrible.

I will keep you two in my thoughts, hang in there okay? Let us know what's happening please.

Kie

Re: ?Fifth Virus? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 12:24:28 PM AEST
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Cynthia; this link will explain the virus to you. He will be fine in a few days.

healthlink.mcw.edu/article/954994100.html

Rita

Re: ?Fifth Virus? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:20:22 PM AEST
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i have always joked in the past that it's great when the kids are ill because it's the only time they're quiet. But when they do get sick like you i find it heartbreaking you just want to be able to take away their suffering, here's hoping for a speedy recovery for your little man.

wildej.

Re: ?Fifth Virus? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 05:13:02 AM AEST
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awwwwww ill send him my love and keep you in my prayers

Re: ?Fifth Virus? (User Rating: 1 )
by SeanMcHaney on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 09:13:17 PM AEST
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I am a little behind, please keep me updated, is your child feeling better?

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