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Array ( [sid] => 43481 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Second Time Around [time] => 2004-04-16 07:43:35 [hometext] => We should be smarter the second time [bodytext] => I told you I was thru with you and we would never meet,
I told you I was thru with you, our loving was complete,
So tell me why when moon is high I suffer from a pang,
And boredom steals into my mind when hanging with the gang.

I said to you those awful things, meant every single one,
I said to you, you could be sure, our union was no fun,
So tell me why when 'Student Prince' is played upon the scene,
My heart swells with the music and my body does careen.

Another point I'd like to make and now that we are thru,
How do you expect for me to stop short loving you?
I want my eyes to compromise but no one else I know,
Can fill the void you've left in me, I thought I'd tell you so.

So if you will, forget what's ill, and I retract my drool.
I say to you, please forgive my acting like a fool,
I promise you, I've learned what's true, without you I'll not be,
We'll start again and this time sure, we'll make it, you will see. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 55 [informant] => norm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
The Second Time Around

Contributed by norm on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 07:43:35 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I told you I was thru with you and we would never meet,
I told you I was thru with you, our loving was complete,
So tell me why when moon is high I suffer from a pang,
And boredom steals into my mind when hanging with the gang.

I said to you those awful things, meant every single one,
I said to you, you could be sure, our union was no fun,
So tell me why when 'Student Prince' is played upon the scene,
My heart swells with the music and my body does careen.

Another point I'd like to make and now that we are thru,
How do you expect for me to stop short loving you?
I want my eyes to compromise but no one else I know,
Can fill the void you've left in me, I thought I'd tell you so.

So if you will, forget what's ill, and I retract my drool.
I say to you, please forgive my acting like a fool,
I promise you, I've learned what's true, without you I'll not be,
We'll start again and this time sure, we'll make it, you will see.




Copyright © norm ... [ 2004-04-16 07:43:35]
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Re: The Second Time Around (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:24:57 PM AEST
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{{{{{{{NORM}}}}}}}}
I hope she hears your loving plea,
For tis not her,then who could it be?
It is obvious your love is true...
Love her sincerely, she'll come back to you!!!
Angel always...godspeed..joni


Re: The Second Time Around (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:44:22 PM AEST
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Oh, who hasn't felt this way?!? You can even make heartache fun.
Best,
Stitch


Re: The Second Time Around (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 06:54:31 AM AEST
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.... I want my eyes to compromise but no one else I know .....

i love that line. good job!

-sean




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