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Array ( [sid] => 43462 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deep Fried Brain [time] => 2004-04-16 02:45:19 [hometext] => it's all in the mind [bodytext] => Deep fried brain, playing a dangerous game
Probing my mind, driving you insane
Looking for answers, what makes me tick, tock
When you finally find them, you may get a shock

I lurk in the shadows of darkness,waiting for my prey
Slit their throats so swiftly, then I slip away
Do I do it out of madness, do it out of fun
Waiting for the next night, awaiting my return

My victims have been many, different ages too
Makes me smile and snigger, watching crimson blood spew
They will never catch me, not even coming near
There's one to many shadows, in which I disappear

So what is the answer, to my deep fried brain
I am not certified, I am not insane
I am just a nightmare, recurring in your head
You better hurry and waken, before I make you dead
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Deep Fried Brain

Contributed by parkman on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:45:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Deep fried brain, playing a dangerous game
Probing my mind, driving you insane
Looking for answers, what makes me tick, tock
When you finally find them, you may get a shock

I lurk in the shadows of darkness,waiting for my prey
Slit their throats so swiftly, then I slip away
Do I do it out of madness, do it out of fun
Waiting for the next night, awaiting my return

My victims have been many, different ages too
Makes me smile and snigger, watching crimson blood spew
They will never catch me, not even coming near
There's one to many shadows, in which I disappear

So what is the answer, to my deep fried brain
I am not certified, I am not insane
I am just a nightmare, recurring in your head
You better hurry and waken, before I make you dead

Copyright © parkman ... [ 2004-04-16 02:45:19]
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Re: Deep Fried Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 02:55:02 AM AEST
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ok now Im scared are you the one in my nightmares?? Im kidding. Gave me the chills man!!
michelle

Re: Deep Fried Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 03:07:03 AM AEST
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This was very crazy, but i like it. Great write.

Re: Deep Fried Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:41:52 AM AEST
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Mmmmm.... blood..... Redrum.... Gotta love your work!!!!

Re: Deep Fried Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:36:02 PM AEST
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"Hold for reveiw Moderator 9 4/16/04"

Damn. I've been trying for ages to get one of those! lol. As for your poem, I think I'll just say two things;

'kin A.

Re: Deep Fried Brain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd September 2010 @ 04:52:12 AM AEST
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nice poem.. i like it.. keep writing..

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