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Array ( [sid] => 43445 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What ifs [time] => 2004-04-15 23:57:43 [hometext] => is about a guy....and caring and the what ifs [bodytext] => Sitting here feeling alone
so chilled to the bone
I can't voice my fears
or stop my tears
asking myself things
and what this brings
happiness to the heart of me
that I truly want to see
yet for once I should believe
or I don't really recieve
all I've known is so different
and I don't know what's meant
what if I said yes
or just I guess
what if I say no
will feelings go
what if I decided such
and miss so much
what if I say I don't want this
think of all I would miss
what if this were meant to be
maybe I should change me
what if I follow my feelings
and hope for all fair dealings
what if I follow my heart
and we are never apart
what if I'm not good enough
think of that as so tough
what if life holds such gems
yet I cause the problems
what if I say mean comments
and not just my two cents
what if I become unreasonable
leave all concern on the table
what if it ended all love
and hurt to all above
maybe I should allow these times as gifts
and not think so much of the what ifs

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 2 [informant] => porcelina_lisa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

What ifs

Contributed by porcelina_lisa on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:57:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Sitting here feeling alone
so chilled to the bone
I can't voice my fears
or stop my tears
asking myself things
and what this brings
happiness to the heart of me
that I truly want to see
yet for once I should believe
or I don't really recieve
all I've known is so different
and I don't know what's meant
what if I said yes
or just I guess
what if I say no
will feelings go
what if I decided such
and miss so much
what if I say I don't want this
think of all I would miss
what if this were meant to be
maybe I should change me
what if I follow my feelings
and hope for all fair dealings
what if I follow my heart
and we are never apart
what if I'm not good enough
think of that as so tough
what if life holds such gems
yet I cause the problems
what if I say mean comments
and not just my two cents
what if I become unreasonable
leave all concern on the table
what if it ended all love
and hurt to all above
maybe I should allow these times as gifts
and not think so much of the what ifs

Copyright © porcelina_lisa ... [ 2004-04-15 23:57:43]
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Re: What ifs (User Rating: 1 )
by Insomnia_InfiniteSadness on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 10:32:11 AM AEST
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The heart is complicated and confusing, the head even more so. You’ve demonstrated this masterfully, and I can really relate to the feeling of uncertainty, as I’m sure most people can. I hope things become clearer, for you and for all of us.

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