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Array ( [sid] => 43428 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Guardian Angel [time] => 2004-04-15 21:24:02 [hometext] => This about my ex. I'm free, You can't do it to my anymore! [bodytext] => I sit watching the waves crash up on shore
Wondering;
Waiting for it to happen,
Waiting for her to come.

The sun begins to set
It is then that I see her
As a look at her she gives me that same look
She gives me that same look she gave me before
That same look of malice
And then simply go back to her friends
As if she hadn’t even seen me.

I hate her,
But I love her also
I long to talk with her
I long to give in to her game
But deep inside my head I hear the words
The words of my Guardian Angel

As I look out to the ocean
Struggling with myself
Fighting the need to go to her
My Guardian angel stays with me
Helping me

This time
This time the lights wins
The light breaks through the dark
Through the dark the light shines through
Thanks to my Guardian Angel
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My Guardian Angel

Contributed by Dizza_13 on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:24:02 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I sit watching the waves crash up on shore
Wondering;
Waiting for it to happen,
Waiting for her to come.

The sun begins to set
It is then that I see her
As a look at her she gives me that same look
She gives me that same look she gave me before
That same look of malice
And then simply go back to her friends
As if she hadn’t even seen me.

I hate her,
But I love her also
I long to talk with her
I long to give in to her game
But deep inside my head I hear the words
The words of my Guardian Angel

As I look out to the ocean
Struggling with myself
Fighting the need to go to her
My Guardian angel stays with me
Helping me

This time
This time the lights wins
The light breaks through the dark
Through the dark the light shines through
Thanks to my Guardian Angel

Copyright © Dizza_13 ... [ 2004-04-15 21:24:02]
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Re: My Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ThePumpkinKing on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 09:51:12 PM AEST
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this was a great poem that I can relate to well...I've found myself in a similiar place....glad to hear the light broke through =)

Re: My Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:13:11 PM AEST
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Nice work dizza keep it up, it's good to see that your getting better after this girl.

Re: My Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:24:11 PM AEST
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Dizza This Is A Wonderful Poem....I'm Glad To See
Your Doing Alot Better...Hang In There...
Great Write :-) Keep Em Coming..
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
****************************

Re: My Guardian Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:25:52 AM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa

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