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Christmas Dolly was all ready to go
But poor Christmas Dolly had made a mistake
The bag of toys she took was indeed fake
She pushed them down chimneys without a clue
Queen Dolly watching wondered what to do.
On Christmas Day the children woke
Their toys sprang out and started to choke
The little girls and boys started to scream
Mummy and Daddy awoke from their dreams
T'was their worst nightmare, but nobody knew
T'was the evil deed of Mr Santy Clause, 'tis true.
Christmas Dolly was banished from the land
Santy Clause was chosen by popular demand
Nobody knows the fate of Christmas Dolly
Nobody knows Santy Clause isn't really jolly
Poor Christmas Dolly, she sits upon the tree
Watching children laughing, staring miserably. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Queen_Dolly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Christmas Dolly's Mistake

Contributed by Queen_Dolly on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Christmas Eve a thousand years ago
Christmas Dolly was all ready to go
But poor Christmas Dolly had made a mistake
The bag of toys she took was indeed fake
She pushed them down chimneys without a clue
Queen Dolly watching wondered what to do.
On Christmas Day the children woke
Their toys sprang out and started to choke
The little girls and boys started to scream
Mummy and Daddy awoke from their dreams
T'was their worst nightmare, but nobody knew
T'was the evil deed of Mr Santy Clause, 'tis true.
Christmas Dolly was banished from the land
Santy Clause was chosen by popular demand
Nobody knows the fate of Christmas Dolly
Nobody knows Santy Clause isn't really jolly
Poor Christmas Dolly, she sits upon the tree
Watching children laughing, staring miserably.

Copyright © Queen_Dolly ... [ 2004-04-15 16:09:22]
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Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:23:43 PM AEST
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LoL- I like!

Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:09:24 PM AEST
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Well, I am shocked and dismayed to say the least! Who knew? Thanks for the heads up. I will watch the old guy from now on. (walks away disgusted with Santy)

Rita

Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:05:37 PM AEST
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Never got a chance to to make amends or even explain, just banished? So sad andso like life, huh? good read...keep it up!

Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:34:42 PM AEST
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that was very cool.

Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Bloodyrose on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:57:43 AM AEST
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*smiles* That made me laugh. Keep it up!

Re: Christmas Dolly's Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Randibee85 on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 06:09:41 PM AEST
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WONDERFUL!

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