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Array ( [sid] => 43369 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Angel [time] => 2004-04-15 13:57:59 [hometext] => Just hear me out and tell me how you feel [bodytext] => Sometimes I feel like the,
Only way to get you,
Is to do that the hard way,
I'm tired of waiting for you,
Cause I need you so much,
And I'm not giving up,
Not ever in my life,
It took so long,
Just for me to reach out to you,
Cause we stopped talking,
And it was like we were not friends,
We look at each other like we don't belong,
But you know we both like each other,
If one of us was very hurt,
We would come runing,
To make sure everything was alright,
I would do anything for you,
And you know that,
I can't live this life,
Without you ever,
There are so much things,
I have to tell you,
But I fear that,
You don't wan't to hear them,
Still, my soul won't rest,
Until I have you,
Just come and get me,
Come and be with me,
So I won't have to cry,
Not one watery tear,
See you are something,
That will never be replaced,
And you will stay inside of my heart,
Cause you are my angel [comments] => 6 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 48 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Angel

Contributed by luckycharm on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:57:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes I feel like the,
Only way to get you,
Is to do that the hard way,
I'm tired of waiting for you,
Cause I need you so much,
And I'm not giving up,
Not ever in my life,
It took so long,
Just for me to reach out to you,
Cause we stopped talking,
And it was like we were not friends,
We look at each other like we don't belong,
But you know we both like each other,
If one of us was very hurt,
We would come runing,
To make sure everything was alright,
I would do anything for you,
And you know that,
I can't live this life,
Without you ever,
There are so much things,
I have to tell you,
But I fear that,
You don't wan't to hear them,
Still, my soul won't rest,
Until I have you,
Just come and get me,
Come and be with me,
So I won't have to cry,
Not one watery tear,
See you are something,
That will never be replaced,
And you will stay inside of my heart,
Cause you are my angel

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-04-15 13:57:59]
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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:10:23 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed.
beautifully dedicated.
I think you need to tell her. let her know what she is and means to you. maybe not all at once, but if you don't you'll wounder what could of been. while wallowing in the knowledge that you should of.
take it slow, a light conversation, a show of friendship over all. let her express her thoughts.
you know there is nothing to be afraid of, just be honest. what happens happens. but you'll be stronger from it. and by Gods will there will be another star crossed match in heaven.
good luck.

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by genuine on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:32:40 PM AEST
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this is really good. there have been times in mt life, that can really relate to this. i hope everything works out for you and your angel.

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:30:46 PM AEST
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I can really relate to that, cause I have a similar type of situation going on. *hugs* Keep talking to each other, and if you want it bad, fight for it! :) I hope it all works out.

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:37:51 PM AEST
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Open Up Your Heart And Tell Her Exactly How You Feel.....
Let Her Know How Much You Really Care....
This Was A Beautiful Dedication :-)
Great Write.....Best Of Luck To You And Your Angel.......
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
*********************************

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:43:31 PM AEST
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I felt much Love there. Nice write

Whisper

Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:37:39 PM AEST
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Pam... tell him! It will make a lot of things so much easier. And at least you could live your life knowing you never missed your opportunity. Best of luck my friend.

Lindsey

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