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[aid] => mick
[title] => Suffer In Silence
[time] => 2004-04-15 11:49:01
[hometext] => Probably the shortest poem I've ever written, it still says so much.
[bodytext] => I appear to be calm
As I hide all the violence
And I put on a smile
While I suffer in silence.
2003
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Suffer In Silence
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Alli
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Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:49:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I appear to be calm
As I hide all the violence
And I put on a smile
While I suffer in silence.
2003
Copyright ©
Alli
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2004-04-15 11:49:01]
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by MyLastBreath on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:51:55 AM AEST
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| I agree it does say a lot. Stay Strong. Good write |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:53:57 AM AEST
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this is really good and to the point. .I liked it alot great write
peace
JENNA |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:01:12 PM AEST
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shortness didnt take away the meanig at all so much can be said with so few words and you said it very cleraly i think we all do that from time to time poets are complex to say the least
michelle |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:07:38 PM AEST
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| short and sweet, but very direct. good write *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by discantbelife on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:14:33 PM AEST
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| this is me and 110% love it good job |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 01:57:09 PM AEST
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| It was short, but beautifully catching your emotions. God bless. |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:00:16 PM AEST
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Short and to the point...
It's very direct...
The length doesn't matter...
What matters...
It what it says...
Beautiful job... loved it! Keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Suffer In Silence
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by lonely_kakashi on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 04:27:27 PM AEST
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yeah been here too many times to want to remember
Well done in getting it across in such a simple way
:D
Kakashi |
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