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Array ( [sid] => 43329 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As If there Is Peace [time] => 2004-04-15 06:09:09 [hometext] => Insipred By Full Metal Jacket and Platoon [bodytext] => Move your sorry ass

your a piece of sh!t
your your countries finest
your worthless!

Indoctrination

You will be better
You will have to kill
Your enemy is communist
Your enemy Is Islamic
Your enemy is facist

Your enemy really is you

You kill on the fields
You murder in the villages
You slaughter civilians
You massicre the village

You are the enemy

Your Insane
Your driven mad
Your pathetic
Your evil
Your your worst fear

You are the Evil Enemy

You return
You come back home
You Have seen so much
You Have done so much
You Have killed so many
You are angry

Your a Real American Patrot
You Have faught well for your country
Your country hates you for failing
You Know the truth
And Here is your Medal
Now your nothiing

But a murderer
But an evil person
But a soldier
But who cares? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 28 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Patriotic )

As If there Is Peace

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:09:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Patriotic

Move your sorry ass

your a piece of sh!t
your your countries finest
your worthless!

Indoctrination

You will be better
You will have to kill
Your enemy is communist
Your enemy Is Islamic
Your enemy is facist

Your enemy really is you

You kill on the fields
You murder in the villages
You slaughter civilians
You massicre the village

You are the enemy

Your Insane
Your driven mad
Your pathetic
Your evil
Your your worst fear

You are the Evil Enemy

You return
You come back home
You Have seen so much
You Have done so much
You Have killed so many
You are angry

Your a Real American Patrot
You Have faught well for your country
Your country hates you for failing
You Know the truth
And Here is your Medal
Now your nothiing

But a murderer
But an evil person
But a soldier
But who cares?

Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-04-15 06:09:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: As If there Is Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 06:51:20 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. Just remember that many soldiers are kids with limited intelligence that have grown up in a society that encourages violence and ignorance. Is it rerally the sheeps fault when the shephard sends him down the wrong hill? Keep up the excellent poetry:)

Re: As If there Is Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 07:22:35 AM AEST
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Like to read poetry and comment.
the write and how you wrote was good.
what you wrote about. I dont agree.
SEE one thing you dont realize about americans is this.
WE DONT WANT TO FIGHT, KILL AND DESTROY. we are brought up to love and take care of and love others. We dont raise OUR CHILDREN TO KILL AND HATE OTHERS. WE DONT PUT GUNS IN LITTLE CHILDRENS HANDS AND SAY KILL. they come back in pain from the heart CAUSE THEY DID KILL. My brother is one of them. a marine. He was brought up in LOVE and to go against that is hard. THEY CAN TRAIN YOU TO TAKE CARE OF YOUR COUNTRY BUT THEY CANT TRAIN YOU TO STOP LOVING ANOTHER HUMAN BEING.

Re: As If there Is Peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Dralion on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 08:53:55 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT!

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