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Array ( [sid] => 43288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to walk to Daisies [time] => 2004-04-14 22:06:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I want to walk to daisies
and I
want to talk to you
I had to wait awhile
and I
had to wait for you

What are you looking for
and what have we found?
You can ask again
now love,
we are the crown

Step back for a taste love
now, I'm coming for you
If they could hold me down
I would not be true

Because

I want to walk to daisies
and I
wish to speak with you
I had to wait on time
and I'm
waiting for you

Where are we going to
and where have you been?
You can love me now
love, I'm here again

Just your heart I'm for
I am the king
If they could break me down
I would have nothing

So I

I want to walk to daisies
and I
want to talk to you
I have a piece of heart
and I
have it just for you

Why are you still shocked
and why aren't we fame?
You can love me now
love, I'll ease your pain

So I can be yours
You are my queen
If they could stop me now
I would lose everything

I would lose my dreams [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 2 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I want to walk to Daisies

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:06:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I want to walk to daisies
and I
want to talk to you
I had to wait awhile
and I
had to wait for you

What are you looking for
and what have we found?
You can ask again
now love,
we are the crown

Step back for a taste love
now, I'm coming for you
If they could hold me down
I would not be true

Because

I want to walk to daisies
and I
wish to speak with you
I had to wait on time
and I'm
waiting for you

Where are we going to
and where have you been?
You can love me now
love, I'm here again

Just your heart I'm for
I am the king
If they could break me down
I would have nothing

So I

I want to walk to daisies
and I
want to talk to you
I have a piece of heart
and I
have it just for you

Why are you still shocked
and why aren't we fame?
You can love me now
love, I'll ease your pain

So I can be yours
You are my queen
If they could stop me now
I would lose everything

I would lose my dreams

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-04-14 22:06:49]
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Re: I want to walk to Daisies (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:35:04 PM AEST
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awesome job! great rhyming!
luved it!*
*XoXoXo*

Re: I want to walk to Daisies (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 03:33:40 PM AEST
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you set a tune in my head........the flow is amazing...........

Re: I want to walk to Daisies (User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:22:01 AM AEST
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good flow in writing-keep it up.

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