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Array ( [sid] => 43287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I wish [time] => 2004-04-14 21:52:26 [hometext] => I wrote this poem to my father. Last night he told me that he is on the edge of suicide. I love him with all my heart and dont know other but than to express my feelings. This is one quarter of them. Sorry its not in correct format. [bodytext] => I wish


I wish things could be fine
Just no problems, no limit of time

I wish all could be just well
but then everything just goes to hell

I remember the night I cried
When you told me you wanted to suicide

I remember the way you made me feel
How everything just then turned surreal

I couldn't imagine life without you
thinking about it makes me want to puke to

if you were to leave me forever
the pain will leave me never

don't leave me on this god forsaken place alone
it will make my heart bone

you will always be in my heart
we will never be split apart

Your the one I talk to when Im down
Your the one I trust
One of the only ones I trust
One of the last I trust

I will always love you
I will always behold you
I would never betray you
I would never hate you
You are what makes me what I am today
Your my father.


I will always love you my father. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Jere [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
I wish

Contributed by Jere on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:52:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I wish


I wish things could be fine
Just no problems, no limit of time

I wish all could be just well
but then everything just goes to hell

I remember the night I cried
When you told me you wanted to suicide

I remember the way you made me feel
How everything just then turned surreal

I couldn't imagine life without you
thinking about it makes me want to puke to

if you were to leave me forever
the pain will leave me never

don't leave me on this god forsaken place alone
it will make my heart bone

you will always be in my heart
we will never be split apart

Your the one I talk to when Im down
Your the one I trust
One of the only ones I trust
One of the last I trust

I will always love you
I will always behold you
I would never betray you
I would never hate you
You are what makes me what I am today
Your my father.


I will always love you my father.




Copyright © Jere ... [ 2004-04-14 21:52:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: I wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:11:40 PM AEST
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thank you for sharing. God bless you and your father.


Re: I wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Hanno on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 11:55:23 PM AEST
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Bit worrying...hope all works out.




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