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Untitled
Contributed by
WiLlYwOnKa
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You sat down next to me,
i took one glance,
embraced your presentness,
and took a gasping breath.
You heard me say Oh My God,
you started to get up,
I said wait.
You looked at me in a funny way,
we went to talk both at the same time,
then and there we fell,
Fell in love.
You loved me,
I loved you,
we both fell,
hit the ground hard.
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WiLlYwOnKa
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2004-04-14 20:43:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 02:14:28 PM AEST (User
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lol, i love that feeling... good write, nice to be reminded of that giddy lovely moment! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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