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Array ( [sid] => 43262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Protecting My Precious One [time] => 2004-04-14 19:50:43 [hometext] => hmm this is how i felt a while ago :D [bodytext] => My blade is ready,
I am calm before the storm,
I am surrounded, my precious in the middle,
my blood begins to race, adrenaline begins to flow,
my heart fills with hatred,
no-one gets my precious, NO-ONE!
My body pulsing with hate,
two decades stored, seeping out now it is,
control im loosing,
I let the anger flow,
my bomb armed, my blade sharp and ready,
the attack i will be ready,
then a friendly face i see,
yet his eyes tell different,
he comes for me,
my blade is swung, a cut had been made,
i open my eyes, my friend in front of me,
unharmed he is, yet torn flash i heard,
look down do i, now the blade i see,
my precious killed me, backstabbed i have been,
this is too much, the crowd dissipates into darkness,
my friend and precious remain,
walk off in the distance they do,
hand in hand as they go,
i am alone now, backstabbed and broken,
I die cold and lonely!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Protecting My Precious One

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:50:43 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My blade is ready,
I am calm before the storm,
I am surrounded, my precious in the middle,
my blood begins to race, adrenaline begins to flow,
my heart fills with hatred,
no-one gets my precious, NO-ONE!
My body pulsing with hate,
two decades stored, seeping out now it is,
control im loosing,
I let the anger flow,
my bomb armed, my blade sharp and ready,
the attack i will be ready,
then a friendly face i see,
yet his eyes tell different,
he comes for me,
my blade is swung, a cut had been made,
i open my eyes, my friend in front of me,
unharmed he is, yet torn flash i heard,
look down do i, now the blade i see,
my precious killed me, backstabbed i have been,
this is too much, the crowd dissipates into darkness,
my friend and precious remain,
walk off in the distance they do,
hand in hand as they go,
i am alone now, backstabbed and broken,
I die cold and lonely!

Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-04-14 19:50:43]
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Re: Protecting My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:58:35 PM AEST
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Like modern day Shakespeare (And that's from a Brit!) Hope you didn't really get cut in real life though. So powerful I couldn't work out if it was metaphorical or not. I've just saved it though so nice one!

Re: Protecting My Precious One (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 01:50:47 PM AEST
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very deep expression going on there T. i hope this isn't a poem referring to me in anyway.

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XgenX

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