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Welcome to the Darkness II
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:43:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Welcome to the darkness I see something,
I hear nothing,
Is it death,
What is left,
Maybe I should give in,
Maybe I should let him win,
If I die,
Will anyone cry,
Will I be missed,
Will anyone be ******,
Or should I fight,
I have the right,
I wish someone would show,
Me what I know,
Goodbye happiness,
And welcome to the darkness.
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lonelywolf04
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2004-04-14 19:43:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Welcome to the Darkness II
(User Rating: 1 ) by NDean on
Monday, 4th December 2006 @ 11:19:31 AM AEST (User
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Gothic. Very good. Only thing I would say is improve on the flow of the poem however everything else is good. Lots of feeling
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