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Array ( [sid] => 43254 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Complete Me [time] => 2004-04-14 19:29:35 [hometext] => my 1st love poem in a while!!!!YAHHH!!! this is for the special someone...you know who you are..... [bodytext] => The sun sets slowly,
A magnificint sight,
Wishing you here,

Clouds inky purple,
Splashed with pink,
I cry invisible tears,

The sky flooded with colour,
Orange and yellow aglow,
Hold my hand and speak softly,

I walk to our favourite spot,
The trees that hang over the water,
I sigh thinking of you,

Climb out onto the branches,
All fear disappered,
Your inside my very soul,

No one there to catch me if I fall,
Gaze into the murky depths below,
Your here sitting beside me,

Time pass's slowly,
Daydreaming of you,
Yearning for your touch,

I must go quickly now,
With the swiftness of a deer,
Yet not as silent,

With each step I fill with remembering,
Knowing that now I go back,
Back to crying yearning and dieing,

A dog whinning,
Needing comfort,
Alone and scared,

I feel the same,
Crying and yearning,
Longing to be with you,

How emptyness feels,
Life without you,
Depressing and sad,

I see you everyday,
But its not enough,
I need the real you,

All day i dream,
Lost and forgotten,
Memorys never lost,

Replayed over in my head,
Fogging my sight,
Taking me away,

To be with you anywhere,
I don't care the place,
Just to be with you is enough,

I give you my soul,
Forever as long as my love,
I'll love you forever and for always,

Strong in my heart,
Never wavering,
You'll stay with me,

Locked in my heart,
My undieing love for you,
Stronger than anyones,

This love is true,
Other than most,
Fake and incomplete,

Your my true one and only,
My first and my last,
Loveing you,

Looking at the now purple sky,
Blues and pink swirls,
A sight saddened without you,

Your my one and only,
Yearning for your touch,
You complete me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You Complete Me

Contributed by TwEeK on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:29:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The sun sets slowly,
A magnificint sight,
Wishing you here,

Clouds inky purple,
Splashed with pink,
I cry invisible tears,

The sky flooded with colour,
Orange and yellow aglow,
Hold my hand and speak softly,

I walk to our favourite spot,
The trees that hang over the water,
I sigh thinking of you,

Climb out onto the branches,
All fear disappered,
Your inside my very soul,

No one there to catch me if I fall,
Gaze into the murky depths below,
Your here sitting beside me,

Time pass's slowly,
Daydreaming of you,
Yearning for your touch,

I must go quickly now,
With the swiftness of a deer,
Yet not as silent,

With each step I fill with remembering,
Knowing that now I go back,
Back to crying yearning and dieing,

A dog whinning,
Needing comfort,
Alone and scared,

I feel the same,
Crying and yearning,
Longing to be with you,

How emptyness feels,
Life without you,
Depressing and sad,

I see you everyday,
But its not enough,
I need the real you,

All day i dream,
Lost and forgotten,
Memorys never lost,

Replayed over in my head,
Fogging my sight,
Taking me away,

To be with you anywhere,
I don't care the place,
Just to be with you is enough,

I give you my soul,
Forever as long as my love,
I'll love you forever and for always,

Strong in my heart,
Never wavering,
You'll stay with me,

Locked in my heart,
My undieing love for you,
Stronger than anyones,

This love is true,
Other than most,
Fake and incomplete,

Your my true one and only,
My first and my last,
Loveing you,

Looking at the now purple sky,
Blues and pink swirls,
A sight saddened without you,

Your my one and only,
Yearning for your touch,
You complete me.




Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-04-14 19:29:35]
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Re: You Complete Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 09:45:56 PM AEST
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How lovely to have someone love you this much. I would run to you on winged feet. A beautiful outpouring of love and need for them.

Rita




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