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all your
Contributed by
lonely_kakashi
on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:27:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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**** all the ********,
iv had it up to hear,
now im loosing my ******* temper,
two decades worth in here,
i've ******* had enough,
i quit, im outa here,
******* deal with your own lives,
im getting out of here,
this ****** pain inside,
just will not no dieappear,
cant beleive life is like this,
i've ******* had enough,
**** life, **** you and all,
im ******* had enough of this,
im ******* out of here.
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2004-04-14 19:27:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: all your
(User Rating: 1 ) by AspenGlow on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:31:36 PM AEST (User
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Strong language, and why not pain is the strongest hardest feeling to deal with. You describe it well. It gets better.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: all your
(User Rating: 1 ) by lonelywolf04 on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 07:33:11 PM AEST (User
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nice and angry only 1 thing i didnt like was it didnt rhym much |
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