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Array ( [sid] => 43195 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I never asked for this (continued) [time] => 2004-04-14 13:23:10 [hometext] => THERE'S MORE...FINALY MORE!! I'm really happy now.... [bodytext] => I never asked for money
I never wanted gold
I didn’t ask for much at all
And I didn’t want this pain.
I thought it would get better
I thought that you would care
But now I sit all alone
Wishing you were here
Now I see there is no time
None at all for me
So I will try to go on
And live a different life
How hard it’s going to get,
For me to leave you be
How my thoughts run back to you
How when I hurt I wish for you
To kiss it all away
--------------------------------------------------
But then at last
To my surprise
I hear your voice again
We plan a time for you and me
I nod my head in glee
Forget about the moving on
And the different life
I could never leave you be
No matter the consequence
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I never asked for this (continued)

Contributed by purplestary on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I never asked for money
I never wanted gold
I didn’t ask for much at all
And I didn’t want this pain.
I thought it would get better
I thought that you would care
But now I sit all alone
Wishing you were here
Now I see there is no time
None at all for me
So I will try to go on
And live a different life
How hard it’s going to get,
For me to leave you be
How my thoughts run back to you
How when I hurt I wish for you
To kiss it all away
--------------------------------------------------
But then at last
To my surprise
I hear your voice again
We plan a time for you and me
I nod my head in glee
Forget about the moving on
And the different life
I could never leave you be
No matter the consequence

Copyright © purplestary ... [ 2004-04-14 13:23:10]
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Re: I never asked for this (continued) (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:48:51 PM AEST
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Ah wonderful ending. Great write! Very well expressed!
Anne :D

Re: I never asked for this (continued) (User Rating: 1 )
by rightwingbrknwing on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST
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This was very good, its hard for me to read a lot of the poetry on this sight and not have to go "are they serious" but in this one all the emotions in it seemed very real and not just a cry for attention which seems rare, i think i've written at least 5 of those exact lines before or at least thought of writing them

Re: I never asked for this (continued) (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:50:50 AM AEST
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yay im glad it all ended well awww everyone loves a happy ending!!...

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