Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 12:48:34 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 43174 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Minds Mess [time] => 2004-04-14 08:50:10 [hometext] => just a thought that a friend applied into my head one day. [bodytext] => What is love?
What is hate?
If they are not one of the same, revolving again and agian.
All the strands of life all intertwined into one, big, mess, left to be untangled by those who are possessed.

Possessed by greed, knowledge or just the will to understand.
Whoever tries to unravel this mess will fail again and again,
For it is the individuals mess.
To unravel, to understand and then to remake again.

For this is the way the world develops, this is the way loves defined.
For those who choose to read this mess,
Even though in your minds you have to do the rest.

Follow your heart,
Follow your love,
Follow that which you feel from above.
And if you fall, do not fail to rise up and walk again.
For a child of two who learns to walk, this is an everyday occurrence of talk.
And for a girl who looks around and sees her Barbie’s head upon the ground,
Life seems to stop still.... and then start again.

As what happens one day doe not affect the next
And at the same time the mess grows small in the mind of a child
As it continues to grow and develop wild.

So to unravel the world you must look from within.
Find your heart,
Find your sole
And find the music that revolves.
Follow these, follow life.
Follow the world but not its strife.

Follow your heart. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Chade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The Minds Mess

Contributed by Chade on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:50:10 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



What is love?
What is hate?
If they are not one of the same, revolving again and agian.
All the strands of life all intertwined into one, big, mess, left to be untangled by those who are possessed.

Possessed by greed, knowledge or just the will to understand.
Whoever tries to unravel this mess will fail again and again,
For it is the individuals mess.
To unravel, to understand and then to remake again.

For this is the way the world develops, this is the way loves defined.
For those who choose to read this mess,
Even though in your minds you have to do the rest.

Follow your heart,
Follow your love,
Follow that which you feel from above.
And if you fall, do not fail to rise up and walk again.
For a child of two who learns to walk, this is an everyday occurrence of talk.
And for a girl who looks around and sees her Barbie’s head upon the ground,
Life seems to stop still.... and then start again.

As what happens one day doe not affect the next
And at the same time the mess grows small in the mind of a child
As it continues to grow and develop wild.

So to unravel the world you must look from within.
Find your heart,
Find your sole
And find the music that revolves.
Follow these, follow life.
Follow the world but not its strife.

Follow your heart.




Copyright © Chade ... [ 2004-04-14 08:50:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Minds Mess (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 08:57:24 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Good advice in this poem. Let us hope that many more people may untangle the mess that they are in.

bernard


Re: The Minds Mess (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:18:17 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Beautiful poetry =) and as said before, good advice.

Queen_Dolly




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com