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Array ( [sid] => 43129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide Note [time] => 2004-04-13 21:40:52 [hometext] => My friend went through something like this. people shouldnt be this sad that they want to commet suicid. But dont worry my friend is ok now. Thank god. [bodytext] => She sat by the window, she sat by the door. She watched as the rain poured. And she felt all the pain. And she looked out and screamed in vain. She had enough of all of this. Being pushed into lockers every day. Being picked on and yelled at by her so called friends and other peers. She was down in tears. Well she has had enoughh. That's for sure. Now it was time to even out the score. Her father was out at Giant and would be back for a while. And her mother did not live with them anymore. She that's when she went to the closet and took the pills out. She swallowed so many she fainted on the couch. But that night she woke up alive and she screamed I WANNA DIE. Her father ran into the living room filled with fear. Whats wrong my dear? he ask. it was just a bad dream she replies and goes away back to his room. She tried many more times. Drugging up on pills....slicing her wrist...even hanging herself with her one of her fathers belts. But every time it failed. The belt broke when she tried to hang herself. She always woke up after taking the pills. And the two times she slice her wrist she got scared and healed herself. But today she would die. So she made a sucide note and took it to school with her. She was going to kill herself after school either that or come to me Brittany for help. But sombody else got there first. And she didnt die now shes still alive.....
P.S. I was not in school that day my friend brought that note to school. I wish I would have been tho. But another friend saved her. And that's all that matters.

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Suicide Note

Contributed by Dark_Cloud_ on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:40:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



She sat by the window, she sat by the door. She watched as the rain poured. And she felt all the pain. And she looked out and screamed in vain. She had enough of all of this. Being pushed into lockers every day. Being picked on and yelled at by her so called friends and other peers. She was down in tears. Well she has had enoughh. That's for sure. Now it was time to even out the score. Her father was out at Giant and would be back for a while. And her mother did not live with them anymore. She that's when she went to the closet and took the pills out. She swallowed so many she fainted on the couch. But that night she woke up alive and she screamed I WANNA DIE. Her father ran into the living room filled with fear. Whats wrong my dear? he ask. it was just a bad dream she replies and goes away back to his room. She tried many more times. Drugging up on pills....slicing her wrist...even hanging herself with her one of her fathers belts. But every time it failed. The belt broke when she tried to hang herself. She always woke up after taking the pills. And the two times she slice her wrist she got scared and healed herself. But today she would die. So she made a sucide note and took it to school with her. She was going to kill herself after school either that or come to me Brittany for help. But sombody else got there first. And she didnt die now shes still alive.....
P.S. I was not in school that day my friend brought that note to school. I wish I would have been tho. But another friend saved her. And that's all that matters.





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Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:44:23 PM AEST
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oi vey...


Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 10:38:27 AM AEST
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a constant stream of thoughts which tells a story. a rhyming rant. very effective in capturing the feelings. keep it up.

addie


Re: Suicide Note (User Rating: 1 )
by badboyzlover on Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 01:04:32 PM AEST
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good write shows alot of emotion. keep up the good work




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