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Findng Ferlin

Contributed by faithmairee on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:47:06 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



We were wayward in our own way
pretending we were orphans
chatting with the real ones
riding on the orphan train
you told them there were worse
things than being orphaned
showing little compassion
but getting them to laugh
and forget their fate
if only for a moment
i cried inside for those
poor children trapped
aboard that train


you and i went where
we wanted to go
did what we wanted to do
living life like
there was no tomorrow
we were always together
to our parent's dismay


it was as though we were
meant to be together
until that dreadful day in may
when i heard my poppa say
he got a new job in another state
and we had to move away


i wrote you letters
that never got returned
i don't know why
you never answered
ferlin, you were my
best friend and confidant
i just can not believe to
you i am so easily forgotten
i sense that things will
never be the same again
unless i find you
somehow my dearest friend
 




Copyright © faithmairee ... [ 2004-04-13 20:47:06]
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Re: Findng Ferlin (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:57:04 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Know what u mean. My best friend and I lost touch 'bout four years ago and it's heart breaking.
Keep up the good writing.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy


Re: Findng Ferlin (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:26:13 PM AEST
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oi, always keep on searching... not too much else to say. beautiful tribute thou... ;0)
~Remy~


Re: Findng Ferlin (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:49:46 PM AEST
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I Know What You Mean I Lost All Touch With A Close Friend Of Mine
She Moved Away About A Year Ago And We Never Call Each Other Any More.
It Hurts Like Crazy... Good Write....... Keep Em Coming..
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
*******************************


Re: Findng Ferlin (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:18:20 PM AEST
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awww faith, dont give up, ive had a few i lost contact with now back in my life again, you just never know, hugs n' love nessa


Re: Findng Ferlin (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 06:20:18 AM AEST
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Lovely write, I think it's sad how friendships can fall apart as quickly as they're formed.




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