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[title] => SOMBODY SAVE ME!
[time] => 2004-04-13 20:14:30
[hometext] => It's dark. What can I say. It has a sucky ending.
[bodytext] => She was breaking down. Falling into a dark cloud. She was trapped inside. If she doesn't get out now she will die. Darkness fills the sky. She breaks down and begins to cry and then that's when she screams SOMBODY SAVE ME! she cries and screams and she yells PLEASE please oh please.... sombody help me. She screams out into the night SOMBODY SAVE ME. I need help. I'm trapped inside. Falling into a black hole, so far away from home. Then thas when she realizes.. She must save herself. And then she screams NOBODY CAN SAVE! she needs to help herself she needs to take of the the belt. The belt of darkness that cover her and keeps her trapped inside. She has to break through because she knew she would not survive, and then she screams NOBODY SAVE ME. I HAVE TO HELP MYSELF. OR FOREVER BE TRAPPED INSIDE....INSIDE OF MYSELF......
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SOMBODY SAVE ME!
Contributed by
Thumper0719
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Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She was breaking down. Falling into a dark cloud. She was trapped inside. If she doesn't get out now she will die. Darkness fills the sky. She breaks down and begins to cry and then that's when she screams SOMBODY SAVE ME! she cries and screams and she yells PLEASE please oh please.... sombody help me. She screams out into the night SOMBODY SAVE ME. I need help. I'm trapped inside. Falling into a black hole, so far away from home. Then thas when she realizes.. She must save herself. And then she screams NOBODY CAN SAVE! she needs to help herself she needs to take of the the belt. The belt of darkness that cover her and keeps her trapped inside. She has to break through because she knew she would not survive, and then she screams NOBODY SAVE ME. I HAVE TO HELP MYSELF. OR FOREVER BE TRAPPED INSIDE....INSIDE OF MYSELF......
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Re: SOMBODY SAVE ME!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:50:40 PM AEST
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This is a good thought and one that it takes a lot of us a long time to accept as a fact of life. You must first learn to trust and depend yourself before you can trust and depend on others. End the end, we all have to take care of our own lives and sharing strengths with others in our life. All in all, our lives are up to us alone. There is a lot of wisdom in your poem.
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Re: SOMBODY SAVE ME!
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:35:35 PM AEST
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Thoughtful poem. Liked the style. Great write!
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