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True Love

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 07:10:56 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Lost i have been,
my world shattered by her,
her name i can not say,
the pain is too much,
why does she act this way,
i loved her so much.

her face, a picture of beauty,
her lips, too irresistable,
she, my goddess,
a figure of perfection,
why can not life be fair.

My eyes gorged with the picture,
my heart beating like a drum,
my body shaking,
i want to faint.

I stare at this sight,
my mind fixated on this delight,
i can not move,
i'm stunned,
let me run away,
i can not face it anymore.




Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-04-13 19:10:56]
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Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 08:35:19 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was full of heart and really expressed the way you were feeling.

Kie


Re: True Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 09:55:15 PM AEST
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oh ! wrong poem!!!!!! this is she,my goddess!!!! not true love!!!!, hmmm how can i fix this?

Love, true love,
its not sumthing that u can describe,
u have to feel it to know what it is,
it fills ur heart,
it fills ur soul.

The world can fall apart,
as long as u have the one you love is there,
nothing can hurt,
nothing bad can happen,
this is how i used to feel.

Love, true love,
its hurts like nothing on earth,
it sends u mad,
near breaking point,
ur on the edge of sanity.

Your world is shattered,
you are alone in the world,
everything hurts,
your luck has changed,
i felt this for a long while.

hopefully it will let me get away wit this ;D ... this is True Love




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