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tearing away at my self confidence and pride,
and what I have left, seems to only drag me down,
for I am now nothing, but a face in the crowd,

from the first word you said, that shattered my heart,
to the feel of your fists, daring to outsmart,
your punches and kicks, may have damaged my skin,
but the pain you have given me, still lies deep within. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 61 [informant] => nail-to-the-head [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Hidden Wounds

Contributed by nail-to-the-head on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Your torments still echo in the depths of my mind,
tearing away at my self confidence and pride,
and what I have left, seems to only drag me down,
for I am now nothing, but a face in the crowd,

from the first word you said, that shattered my heart,
to the feel of your fists, daring to outsmart,
your punches and kicks, may have damaged my skin,
but the pain you have given me, still lies deep within.

Copyright © nail-to-the-head ... [ 2004-04-13 10:33:35]
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Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by ADreamWithinADream on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:40:36 AM AEST
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wow, um maybe they should make a new category..like Hurt poetry or something, that was a very good write..good job all the best ;)

Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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it's very powerful. you'll never be able to erase what he's done, but atleast one day, you'll be free to move on.

Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:40:53 AM AEST
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awesome write. very vivid. keep it up!

addie

Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:49:51 AM AEST
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Tragically beautiful.
I can feel your pain..
The hurt inside seems to never cease.
You've described it so well.
Beautiful indeed.

Queen_Dolly

Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 04:46:23 PM AEST
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i really know what you are passing through cuz i passed through it all you need to do is to talk to someone that undrestands you or talk to that person that hurt you.

Re: Hidden Wounds (User Rating: 1 )
by nail-to-the-head on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:21:52 PM AEST
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thanks to all the comments so far! my friends band saw this and will now be making it into a song for their album. thanks everyone for you support.

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