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Array ( [sid] => 4298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => *Where Am I Going In Life?* [time] => 2002-09-26 09:20:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after I got in a huge fight with my parents! [bodytext] => Where am I going in life?
What is my purpose?
I only screw up,
And get punished for it.

What is there to look forward to?
Will it be an adventure?
Am I trying too hard?
Or trying too little?

I am always messing up,
I try so hard to accomplish my dreams.
Is it worth all this effort?
Is it going to be worth it in the end?

Some days I never want to end,
But then I want some to be over so quick.
I cannot keep living in this past,
I have to take risks.

I have to live my life to the fullest,
But I don’t know.
I might not be around the next day.
Should I just enjoy everyday…

As if it was my last? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 240 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Val [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

*Where Am I Going In Life?*

Contributed by Val on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 09:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Where am I going in life?
What is my purpose?
I only screw up,
And get punished for it.

What is there to look forward to?
Will it be an adventure?
Am I trying too hard?
Or trying too little?

I am always messing up,
I try so hard to accomplish my dreams.
Is it worth all this effort?
Is it going to be worth it in the end?

Some days I never want to end,
But then I want some to be over so quick.
I cannot keep living in this past,
I have to take risks.

I have to live my life to the fullest,
But I don’t know.
I might not be around the next day.
Should I just enjoy everyday…

As if it was my last?

Copyright Â© Val ... [ 2002-09-26 09:20:00]
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Re: *Where Am I Going In Life?* (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Thursday, 26th September 2002 @ 09:49:08 AM AEST
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Hi Val,

Ummm Yes you should to the last one!

I think maybe the writing could be where you're going or maybe the football, sorry soccer! What position do you play?

You may enjoy a couple of my writes 'Ryan Giggs' and 'Them!' or you may not!

Excellent writing

With love
Dean:-)

Re: *Where Am I Going In Life?* (User Rating: 1 )
by Val on Tuesday, 15th October 2002 @ 12:32:00 PM AEST
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Hey Dean,

Thanks for commenting on my poem! Sorry I am replying so late but I have been so busy. It's nice to know people read them and enjoy them. Yeah, do you play soccer? What position? I play defense: sweeper or stopper. I'll be on a look out for some of your poems. Maybe if you could, possibly email some to me lzuro@msn.com. Thanks! ~Val~

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