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Each reverberating inside my empty heart
Piercing through my very soul
Anguish begins to appear on my pillow
In the form of long retained tears
Unheard agony that will never be relinquished
I lament over the act that left me
In this subdued state, lowest I have ever been

The water drips off the roof in tiny rivulets
Slowly but invariably constant
Paralleling the moisture on my coarse cheeks
Images flash and vanish instantly
Lingering in my mind as if glued
On the black inside of my eyelids
Tormented by the very thought of you
Yet I can not help loving you
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A Thousand Needles

Contributed by xlguesswho14xx on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A thousand needles pounding on the roof
Each reverberating inside my empty heart
Piercing through my very soul
Anguish begins to appear on my pillow
In the form of long retained tears
Unheard agony that will never be relinquished
I lament over the act that left me
In this subdued state, lowest I have ever been

The water drips off the roof in tiny rivulets
Slowly but invariably constant
Paralleling the moisture on my coarse cheeks
Images flash and vanish instantly
Lingering in my mind as if glued
On the black inside of my eyelids
Tormented by the very thought of you
Yet I can not help loving you

Copyright © xlguesswho14xx ... [ 2004-04-12 21:41:28]
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Re: A Thousand Needles (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 09:56:52 PM AEST
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awesome. wow. it's so...real. i know exactly how you feel. i love the imagery. keep it up!

addie

Re: A Thousand Needles (User Rating: 1 )
by monkey on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:11:09 PM AEST
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Oh. My. Gosh. This is exactly how I feel at this point in my life. This poem is absoulutley beautiful. Magnificent job!!
Monkey

Re: A Thousand Needles (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 10:27:58 PM AEST
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Damn......That has been me many, many nights my friend. This just sliced its way into my soul.
Very, very well done
Larry

Re: A Thousand Needles (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 06:35:54 AM AEST
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ooh very nice...through all my confused feelings rite now this one made it right through to my heart....
magnificent work
*thumbs up*

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