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I feel your tenderness reaching inside me
Soul navigating toward soul
Curling around each other
When the winds blow cold in our faces
Our teary eyes say no more
About what we have lost
Give it up to the past like we said we would
Let the ghosts feast on that corpse
While we walk side by side for the very first time
Feeling everything from the beginning
Equal parts of you and me moving forward
Unplanned and unexpected we happened
Chance formed us for this one moment
When happiness could be ours
With fingers eager to explore the contours
We have only seen from distant shores
Carefully we stroke with tender words
Before passion’s storm sweeps us away
In blissful torrents, we have waited for so long




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Soul Navigation

Contributed by merry on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove



_____________________

I feel your tenderness reaching inside me
Soul navigating toward soul
Curling around each other
When the winds blow cold in our faces
Our teary eyes say no more
About what we have lost
Give it up to the past like we said we would
Let the ghosts feast on that corpse
While we walk side by side for the very first time
Feeling everything from the beginning
Equal parts of you and me moving forward
Unplanned and unexpected we happened
Chance formed us for this one moment
When happiness could be ours
With fingers eager to explore the contours
We have only seen from distant shores
Carefully we stroke with tender words
Before passion’s storm sweeps us away
In blissful torrents, we have waited for so long








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Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Queen_Dolly on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:37:40 PM AEST
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This is simply beautiful. Your choice of words is perfect. I can imagine how you're feeling. Lovely poem. Queen_Dolly


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:44:50 PM AEST
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A beautiful well written poem.
Well done


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by MyLastBreath on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:45:51 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery! Great write! :)


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:34:25 PM AEST
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When distance interferes with love the wait is gruesome. It weighs on the mind, altering thoughts, fueling insecurires but love is a mystical thing. It can break boundaries unheard of and it can navigate souls toward each other with no thought to time or distance in miles.

But there are times when I use to wish that my arms were long enough to comfort when words were not enough.

God have I rambled on this one...

A deeply touching poem...

Kie


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 05:34:15 PM AEST
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beautiful poem though sad....


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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ahh gaille, this is so beautiful, just love your poetry, your style is wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa

*roses*


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 02:16:44 PM AEST
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Brilliantly expressed poem filled with vivid imagery! Enjoyed reading it. Awesome write!
Anne :D


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:19:50 PM AEST
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Captures the feelings and sentiments and longings and quenchings perfectly.
Flawless.
Stitch


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 04:21:18 PM AEST
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The was sooo soft and senuous....hopeful and heartbreaking. You have outdone yourself with this masterpiece. ( sighs)

Roses at your feet
Larry


Re: Soul Navigation (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 12:20:25 PM AEST
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oh...this is so beautiful...i don't know what to say...xxx




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