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papre bib on chain 'round neck
bright ass light in my eyes
metal tools to dig and check

pulling cheeks so he can see
way in back my molar fifteen
now the ice test i think hes mad
this kind of test i have never seen

no relaxing in this chair
clink and clank from metal tools
drill bits buffers what else they hide
sucking tube for if its you who drools
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A trip to the Dentist

Contributed by putteragain on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:51:28 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

dentist chair all laid back
papre bib on chain 'round neck
bright ass light in my eyes
metal tools to dig and check

pulling cheeks so he can see
way in back my molar fifteen
now the ice test i think hes mad
this kind of test i have never seen

no relaxing in this chair
clink and clank from metal tools
drill bits buffers what else they hide
sucking tube for if its you who drools

Copyright © putteragain ... [ 2004-04-12 14:51:28]
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Re: A trip to the Dentist (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:03:10 PM AEST
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good write, by the way thanks for reminding me of my appointment.Ouch!

Re: A trip to the Dentist (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:05:46 PM AEST
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From one sista to another I can certainly RELATE!

Is there anything like having a tube suck your spit out? I mean how elegant is that?

I always feel like a cross between frankenstein and being totally incapacitated.

Dentists are no fun....

A very unique poem...

Kie

Re: A trip to the Dentist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 03:32:16 PM AEST
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painful just thinking about it! good job and that's the tooth!!

wildej.

Re: A trip to the Dentist (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 04:58:41 PM AEST
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First its a good poem! Secondly it made me laugh remembering my last visit to the dentist! Lol! Great write
Anne :D

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