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Array ( [sid] => 42887 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Hold onto the Pieces [time] => 2004-04-12 12:34:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Daily I call on the Lord,
Always asking for His help.
I’m facing another battle,
And I can’t do it by myself.
These problems just seem too big,
My heart, like it’s about to break.
I pray for mercy and deliverance,
“These burdens from me , please take.”
God said all we have to do is ask,
And with a small seed of faith, believe.
“So, why is it Lord,” I tearfully beg,
“That I haven’t yet received?”
God whispers, “I hear your cries,
Daily falling like the rain.
I gave my Whole self a long time ago,
So that I could take away your pain.”
“I have already proven my love for you,
Broken hearts, I wish to ease.
You’ve handed me your problems,
Yet you’re still holding back a piece.”
“Cast ALL your burdens on the Lord,
Give every piece to me.
When you’ve placed them in my care,
Then, you shall be set free.”
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Don't Hold onto the Pieces

Contributed by kandis on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Daily I call on the Lord,
Always asking for His help.
I’m facing another battle,
And I can’t do it by myself.
These problems just seem too big,
My heart, like it’s about to break.
I pray for mercy and deliverance,
“These burdens from me , please take.”
God said all we have to do is ask,
And with a small seed of faith, believe.
“So, why is it Lord,” I tearfully beg,
“That I haven’t yet received?”
God whispers, “I hear your cries,
Daily falling like the rain.
I gave my Whole self a long time ago,
So that I could take away your pain.”
“I have already proven my love for you,
Broken hearts, I wish to ease.
You’ve handed me your problems,
Yet you’re still holding back a piece.”
“Cast ALL your burdens on the Lord,
Give every piece to me.
When you’ve placed them in my care,
Then, you shall be set free.”

Copyright Â© kandis ... [ 2004-04-12 12:34:07]
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Re: Don't Hold onto the Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:39:49 PM AEST
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I like your poem, it is very nice. It is something to really think about. Check out my poem entitled"The time I cry".-luckycharm. P.S, you are a very good writer.

Re: Don't Hold onto the Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:47:27 PM AEST
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a very inspiring write
Well done
Larry

Re: Don't Hold onto the Pieces (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:34:02 PM AEST
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You sure write beautiful spiritual poetry.While reading this,I found a new understanding to one of my problems.Who knows?Maybe God sent me here today to read your beautiful poetry,get inspired and understand things that I sometimes fail to see ...:o)~*5 stars*~
PumpkinPie
-xox-

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