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Array ( [sid] => 42883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Smile [time] => 2004-04-12 12:08:06 [hometext] => Where have we heard all this before?... [bodytext] => Your worlds falling apart at the seams,
Your lifes shrink wrapped for all to see,
But its not as bad as it seems,
Your just wanting to be

Life just keeps on jerking you around,
Everyones dying and crying infront of you,
Unhappy childhood memories easily found,
Dreams and suggestions; who cares god loves you!

Daddy says mummy says smile, smile, smile,
Forget all the pain that you ever ever felt,
Just goahead smile its been a while,
Who cares if its fake wanna see that frown melt

Its kinda funny that people wanna see,
People happy all the time,
To mask their own insecurity,
They just dont care, they want you to mime

Even if it, even if it, hurts hurts hurts
Andyourwholeentire*****worldisgonnaend
end/end/end
And its the end of the world
and you know it
*****************************************
Just stop a second your feeling fine,
You know your happy
And thats sublime
Your life maybe crappy
But please hide your feelings
Cos your brining me down
Just stop that screaming
Just smile
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 242 [topic] => 56 [informant] => alecfernadez [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )
Smile

Contributed by alecfernadez on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:08:06 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Your worlds falling apart at the seams,
Your lifes shrink wrapped for all to see,
But its not as bad as it seems,
Your just wanting to be

Life just keeps on jerking you around,
Everyones dying and crying infront of you,
Unhappy childhood memories easily found,
Dreams and suggestions; who cares god loves you!

Daddy says mummy says smile, smile, smile,
Forget all the pain that you ever ever felt,
Just goahead smile its been a while,
Who cares if its fake wanna see that frown melt

Its kinda funny that people wanna see,
People happy all the time,
To mask their own insecurity,
They just dont care, they want you to mime

Even if it, even if it, hurts hurts hurts
Andyourwholeentire*****worldisgonnaend
end/end/end
And its the end of the world
and you know it
*****************************************
Just stop a second your feeling fine,
You know your happy
And thats sublime
Your life maybe crappy
But please hide your feelings
Cos your brining me down
Just stop that screaming
Just smile




Copyright © alecfernadez ... [ 2004-04-12 12:08:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:50:14 PM AEST
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A very emotional write filled with great internal turmoil.

Well done.
Larry


Re: Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 01:50:13 PM AEST
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How timely. I'm having just this kind of day. A very good write. Very well thought out and expressed.
Stitch


Re: Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Putteragain on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 02:11:57 PM AEST
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i agree with larry so raw and open sad people atre truly that way hide behind the smile

you are aloud to feel what you are feeling
because your feelings are real

michelle




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