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Array ( [sid] => 42831 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Torn between you [time] => 2004-04-12 00:19:00 [hometext] => This is to no one really. Mainly all my past realtionships. (No there are not that many) To hate someone so much, that you love them. Now that is the agony of pain. Hope you all enjoy... MaJ [bodytext] => Close your eyes
don't you feel the rejection?
Does it hurt?
Come here now

I've got something to tell you, honey...
I don't want you back

Won't you take me back
won't you take me back with you
won't you take me back
won't you wrap me with your love again...

Get out of my life
I know I failed but I'll make it up to you
get out of my life
I know I failed you, just let me try again

You're to blame
I'm no more you business
Can't you see I'm praying
for your forgiveness

Shut your mouth
I don't need your affection, darling
does it hurt?
Come here now

I've got something to tell you, honey...
I don't want you back

I will do anything you want
but hold me forever
be a nightmare in my sleep
scare me forever

like a bullet in my soul
kill me forever
all the lies I have sold to you
are sour thorns in my mouth forever

I dont want you no more
but I love you forever
Dont you love me no more
will you love me forever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 39 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Torn between you

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:19:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Close your eyes
don't you feel the rejection?
Does it hurt?
Come here now

I've got something to tell you, honey...
I don't want you back

Won't you take me back
won't you take me back with you
won't you take me back
won't you wrap me with your love again...

Get out of my life
I know I failed but I'll make it up to you
get out of my life
I know I failed you, just let me try again

You're to blame
I'm no more you business
Can't you see I'm praying
for your forgiveness

Shut your mouth
I don't need your affection, darling
does it hurt?
Come here now

I've got something to tell you, honey...
I don't want you back

I will do anything you want
but hold me forever
be a nightmare in my sleep
scare me forever

like a bullet in my soul
kill me forever
all the lies I have sold to you
are sour thorns in my mouth forever

I dont want you no more
but I love you forever
Dont you love me no more
will you love me forever




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2004-04-12 00:19:00]
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Re: Torn between you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:31:11 AM AEST
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Very good job here!
It's hell when the head argues with the heart.
Awesome! Very creative.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Torn between you (User Rating: 1 )
by Dina on Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 12:33:41 AM AEST
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I know what you're going through. It is love and anger at the same time, you are confused but I guess this is what love's all about. Go ahead with your life and keep on writing, you have the talent believe me.


Re: Torn between you (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 12:01:14 AM AEST
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This was long and good. I can say you did a good job but I know how you feel




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